Comments received on poems by thehippiepoet
Innocence taken
Heather T said:
\"Above the lake we tried to give
Life to the waters cold and still
Yet if we drown we cannot live
And if we drown we cannot live\"
My favorite.
June 30th, 2017 11:43
Heather T said:
\"Above the lake we tried to give
Life to the waters cold and still
Yet if we drown we cannot live
And if we drown we cannot live\"
My favorite.
June 30th, 2017 11:43
Innocence taken
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream expressed so real that until I read your side notes I was beguiled by a sister\'s eyes biting on twisted lure - a clever repeat too of that final line.
June 30th, 2017 09:47
Fay Slimm. said:
A dream expressed so real that until I read your side notes I was beguiled by a sister\'s eyes biting on twisted lure - a clever repeat too of that final line.
June 30th, 2017 09:47
Yellow flowers
FredPeyer said:
Had to look up what the word \"betwixt\" means. Somebody once said that a poet creates a painting (or picture) with words, and you succeeded very elegantly. Thanks!
June 23rd, 2017 18:14
FredPeyer said:
Had to look up what the word \"betwixt\" means. Somebody once said that a poet creates a painting (or picture) with words, and you succeeded very elegantly. Thanks!
June 23rd, 2017 18:14
Yellow flowers
P.H.Rose said:
Yes I too love this poem
Just flows beautifully
I love the rhythm
June 23rd, 2017 17:31
P.H.Rose said:
Yes I too love this poem
Just flows beautifully
I love the rhythm
June 23rd, 2017 17:31
Yellow flowers
Heather T said:
I think this is so lovely, a bit haunting at the end with the repeating verse. I\'m so curious about the man! Is there a backstory?
June 23rd, 2017 15:20
Heather T said:
I think this is so lovely, a bit haunting at the end with the repeating verse. I\'m so curious about the man! Is there a backstory?
June 23rd, 2017 15:20
Eden
Goldfinch60 said:
The body may be nothing but the Spirit flowing through it is.
Good write.
June 4th, 2017 00:59
Goldfinch60 said:
The body may be nothing but the Spirit flowing through it is.
Good write.
June 4th, 2017 00:59
Eden
swingline said:
I never read that version of the Garden of Eden before . It must be in one of the new translations . But vividly descriptive , like eating at McDonald\'s .
June 3rd, 2017 11:02
swingline said:
I never read that version of the Garden of Eden before . It must be in one of the new translations . But vividly descriptive , like eating at McDonald\'s .
June 3rd, 2017 11:02
Treasured lust
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, hippie! I\'ve been the \'older man\', by twenty years. It lasted twenty three years ... not a bad run.
June 2nd, 2017 13:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Welcome to MPS, hippie! I\'ve been the \'older man\', by twenty years. It lasted twenty three years ... not a bad run.
June 2nd, 2017 13:40
Treasured lust
swingline said:
Sounds like you are infatuated with this older man and find bliss in his presence .
June 2nd, 2017 13:23
swingline said:
Sounds like you are infatuated with this older man and find bliss in his presence .
June 2nd, 2017 13:23
