Comments received on poems by ab120ma
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Michael Edwards said:
Yes - and are to the touch - but otherwise a great first posting - keep at it.
June 11th, 2017 02:58
Michael Edwards said:
Yes - and are to the touch - but otherwise a great first posting - keep at it.
June 11th, 2017 02:58
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Frank Prem said:
Bravo for having a crack, ab120ma. I\'ll just give you a heads up that you\'ve mixed up the tenses a little - you\'ve gone from \'they\' to \'is\'. Check that out and keep writing.
June 11th, 2017 01:26
Frank Prem said:
Bravo for having a crack, ab120ma. I\'ll just give you a heads up that you\'ve mixed up the tenses a little - you\'ve gone from \'they\' to \'is\'. Check that out and keep writing.
June 11th, 2017 01:26
