Comments received on poems by Ce\'la\'vis Carpediem
Embrace
malubotelho said:
For a long time I\'ve been looking to read poems from people from this generation. I was curious what the youngish people wright. About what are the feelings put into writing now a days. I\'m happy to have found you. Fresh. I have a son your age and he is a rapper. He is a poet too. Thanks, very nice writing.
June 22nd, 2017 13:29
malubotelho said:
For a long time I\'ve been looking to read poems from people from this generation. I was curious what the youngish people wright. About what are the feelings put into writing now a days. I\'m happy to have found you. Fresh. I have a son your age and he is a rapper. He is a poet too. Thanks, very nice writing.
June 22nd, 2017 13:29
Embrace
The Invisible said:
Wow, most amazing very sad yet nicely written. The font to just makes it seem I don\'t know it just fits the whole poem.
June 12th, 2017 14:46
The Invisible said:
Wow, most amazing very sad yet nicely written. The font to just makes it seem I don\'t know it just fits the whole poem.
June 12th, 2017 14:46
Body of Affection
swingline said:
Rapid should be rapidly
Body\'s should be bodies
June 11th, 2017 15:48
swingline said:
Rapid should be rapidly
Body\'s should be bodies
June 11th, 2017 15:48
Body of Affection
swingline said:
Good poetry . Minor spelling flaws . But overall a very good first time submission .
June 11th, 2017 02:42
swingline said:
Good poetry . Minor spelling flaws . But overall a very good first time submission .
June 11th, 2017 02:42