Comments received on poems by taia edwards
your my otther half
Cheeky Missy said:
This beautifully conveys the reality of "being in love." Short and sweet. And poignant.
August 31st, 2011 21:57
Cheeky Missy said:
This beautifully conveys the reality of "being in love." Short and sweet. And poignant.
August 31st, 2011 21:57
Despair
Cheeky Missy said:
The expression of total attachment and fulfillment perfectly expresses being "in love." The element of despair in both the title and conclusion is a tad confusing, as if this is only the first stanza to a larger work. Wherefore despair? Excellent depiction.
August 23rd, 2011 21:27
Cheeky Missy said:
The expression of total attachment and fulfillment perfectly expresses being "in love." The element of despair in both the title and conclusion is a tad confusing, as if this is only the first stanza to a larger work. Wherefore despair? Excellent depiction.
August 23rd, 2011 21:27
~My Rose~
Cheeky Missy said:
Great imagery, conveying via the helpful author's note, the reality of "love" gone awry. The fragrant beauty lures and pricks so painfully, a superb metaphor. A tad reminiscent of the medieval romance of Barbara Allen's cruelty.
August 23rd, 2011 21:22
Cheeky Missy said:
Great imagery, conveying via the helpful author's note, the reality of "love" gone awry. The fragrant beauty lures and pricks so painfully, a superb metaphor. A tad reminiscent of the medieval romance of Barbara Allen's cruelty.
August 23rd, 2011 21:22
