Comments received on poems by BloodPho3nix
Recovery
George C. Biester said:
Good poem. I know the feeling brother. You relayed it very well.
August 30th, 2017 22:52
George C. Biester said:
Good poem. I know the feeling brother. You relayed it very well.
August 30th, 2017 22:52
Shadow
Louis Gibbs said:
It sounds like a moment of escape from ego to me, which is a rare and precious experience. Congratulations, Jesse!, on this one!
August 27th, 2017 10:55
Louis Gibbs said:
It sounds like a moment of escape from ego to me, which is a rare and precious experience. Congratulations, Jesse!, on this one!
August 27th, 2017 10:55
The First
onepauly said:
you can be a victim of your thoughts or you can be a conqueror of them. you are able to decide which ones to work with. tell the others to scat! read my post I put in 10 minutes ago.
July 1st, 2017 18:32
onepauly said:
you can be a victim of your thoughts or you can be a conqueror of them. you are able to decide which ones to work with. tell the others to scat! read my post I put in 10 minutes ago.
July 1st, 2017 18:32
Lost
Poetic Dan said:
We fall to the lowest depths
Feel the darkest of dark
To truly find who we are
Speaking from the heart
Keep writing my friend
June 30th, 2017 03:04
Poetic Dan said:
We fall to the lowest depths
Feel the darkest of dark
To truly find who we are
Speaking from the heart
Keep writing my friend
June 30th, 2017 03:04
Love-Blinded Eyes
onepauly said:
this poem is a masterpiece!
I\'ve never read such an intelligent poem. you have what it takes. I\'ve had male lovers also. now they have all passed away. and I\'m alone. I\'m happy you found another.
June 27th, 2017 20:14
onepauly said:
this poem is a masterpiece!
I\'ve never read such an intelligent poem. you have what it takes. I\'ve had male lovers also. now they have all passed away. and I\'m alone. I\'m happy you found another.
June 27th, 2017 20:14
The End of Time - Acrostic Poem
onepauly said:
obstacles are their to be overcome
time is an illusion, but it is a way of measure. see the beginning of time always in the present. we are all learning. not excluding myself.
June 26th, 2017 03:05
onepauly said:
obstacles are their to be overcome
time is an illusion, but it is a way of measure. see the beginning of time always in the present. we are all learning. not excluding myself.
June 26th, 2017 03:05
The End of Time - Acrostic Poem
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is always there and may your time be filled with words as good as these.
June 26th, 2017 00:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, time is always there and may your time be filled with words as good as these.
June 26th, 2017 00:47
The End of Time - Acrostic Poem
kevin browne said:
life comes and it goes and we all ride the same route with some getting it right and some getting it wrong. death comes to us all so take advantage of what time you have here on this planet and leave behind a stamp or a marking of what you\'re all about. you have certainly stamped this poem with authority, a sad but an honest write.
June 26th, 2017 00:29
kevin browne said:
life comes and it goes and we all ride the same route with some getting it right and some getting it wrong. death comes to us all so take advantage of what time you have here on this planet and leave behind a stamp or a marking of what you\'re all about. you have certainly stamped this poem with authority, a sad but an honest write.
June 26th, 2017 00:29
Degenerate
onepauly said:
did you put them back on the shelf
AFTER taking enough to kill?
read your poem again.
sometimes it all feels different
people love you.
do you love them back?
June 24th, 2017 00:05
onepauly said:
did you put them back on the shelf
AFTER taking enough to kill?
read your poem again.
sometimes it all feels different
people love you.
do you love them back?
June 24th, 2017 00:05
Degenerate
onepauly said:
there is always
something called
sometimes.
if you need help
just write
June 23rd, 2017 23:58
onepauly said:
there is always
something called
sometimes.
if you need help
just write
June 23rd, 2017 23:58
Degenerate
Louis Gibbs said:
But consider ... what if it isn\'t over when you check out of this lifetime? What if you\'ve just blown a chance to advance your soul? Just saying what many believe, Blood. And yes, you are a good poet.
June 23rd, 2017 21:21
Louis Gibbs said:
But consider ... what if it isn\'t over when you check out of this lifetime? What if you\'ve just blown a chance to advance your soul? Just saying what many believe, Blood. And yes, you are a good poet.
June 23rd, 2017 21:21
Degenerate
FredPeyer said:
After reading this the first time I went back to read your other three poems as well. You are a gifted writer! Just keep on writing and don\'t do anything stupid, like dying. I am serious, you do have what it takes!
June 23rd, 2017 20:58
FredPeyer said:
After reading this the first time I went back to read your other three poems as well. You are a gifted writer! Just keep on writing and don\'t do anything stupid, like dying. I am serious, you do have what it takes!
June 23rd, 2017 20:58
Covenant
John Gover said:
I love the reference to the \"Lords Prayer\" at the end there! Well done.
June 17th, 2017 03:50
John Gover said:
I love the reference to the \"Lords Prayer\" at the end there! Well done.
June 17th, 2017 03:50
This is Living
Louis Gibbs said:
Well expressed first poem on this site, \'Blood\". Welcome to MPS.
June 15th, 2017 16:48
Louis Gibbs said:
Well expressed first poem on this site, \'Blood\". Welcome to MPS.
June 15th, 2017 16:48
