Comments received on poems by halie88



After Ten
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME TO MPS HALIE ~ Loved the frankness of your first Poem and the excellent structure ~ Rhyming Couplets. To ME Single Mums are the Salt of the Earth and I have several Students & Friends who are Single Mums so I can empathise. My Fiancee (ANGELA who shares this site) is in New Zealand (11,500 miles away on a YEAR Work Exchange) so I can share your After Ten Blues and BOYS don\'t have TOYS ! Every Blessing for You & Your Family ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check our site ~ Thanks. MPS works by reading and commenting on each others poems ~ You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ OK


October 14th, 2018 03:42