Comments received on poems by Salem_B911



True Love Never to be
dusk arising said:

Good stuff but.... This deserves to be more than one poem because it covers quite a few aspects.
From my experience shorter, single subject poems can be more punchy and deliver the message more effectively.
Food for though?

January 10th, 2020 11:56

Final Breath
SabreLi said:

I\'m always intrigued by other people\'s ideas of what the last breath is like, and your interpretation and writing seems to mirror my own angle on the topic. An interesting, though tragic premise, hopefully if you are in a dark place you find your way out through your writing.

Good work.

November 29th, 2019 11:55

Final Breath
Unsub said:

That was one long final breath!

Very emotional & powerful projection!

Unsub.

November 29th, 2019 05:26

Sinister Hatred
orchidee said:

Erm, a bad-hair day there?! (heehee).

January 27th, 2019 03:14

Lifes Plight
SLR said:

This is beautiful and profound. Well written. And SO TRUE!!! Great post!

May 18th, 2018 20:45

Twin Flames
FredPeyer said:

I like your love poem, especially the last four lines with the \"empire of love and compassion\". Looking forward to reading more from you.

June 23rd, 2017 20:29