Comments received on poems by david



The love can never change
Goldfinch60 said:

Love certainly does transcend all. Good write.

October 9th, 2017 08:15

The love can never change
Fay Slimm. said:

The truth of love is expressed so eloquently in this poignant read David and your own comment above bears out the face that real love never dies and cannot fad. A compelling read.

October 9th, 2017 05:23

Back to something trustworthy
david said:

Thank you.

September 4th, 2017 03:30

Together we are in heaven
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write and very true, every moment is special especially this one.

July 31st, 2017 04:14

Somewhere so much better
onepauly said:

this is brilliant! I can identify with this. why cant we find something now to enjoy. why does it have to be around the next corner. were in the negative always looking for the positive. why cant we be positive right now.

July 21st, 2017 04:27

Somewhere so much better
charlesbarrett said:

Nice piece. Beautifully written. And I love the sentiment behind it. Very thought provoking. Nice work.

July 21st, 2017 00:03

The power of love
burning-embers said:

Yep, just as DS/KS says above very similar to corinthians. Should u wish to hear that voiced then Joni Mitchell track \'love\' on CD entitled \'wild things run fast\' puts it beautifully accompanied by the haunting soprano sax of Wayne Shorter. I surely would love thhis played at my funeral.

July 18th, 2017 04:31

The power of love
FredPeyer said:

Very well written - the true meaning of love.

July 17th, 2017 23:35

The power of love
Its Raskolnikov said:

Beautiful and completely correct

July 17th, 2017 23:24

Blank canvas
david said:

Love is all there is, and then beyond, even in emptiness, there too is love.

Thank you for your reflections.

July 8th, 2017 18:58

Blank canvas
FredPeyer said:

David, this is a great poem with an intriguing concept of love. Need to think it over a bit. (Am not too fast sometimes!)

July 8th, 2017 18:46

Blank canvas
Nicholas Browning said:

This is a wonderful take on the essence of a yet to be drawn portrait, or a blank canvas. We are all blank; We must paint with the color that we deem best. Good job, and well done.

July 8th, 2017 17:54

The heart of all things
Fay Slimm. said:

I love the personification of heart essence you make in this lovely reading and how after its journey on earth it beats again in place after place - thank you David for sharing its divine everlastingness.

June 30th, 2017 13:57

This moment is my lover
Fay Slimm. said:

We have only the now and coat it with lovely gladness we must - another beautifully rendered way to transcend into reality David.

June 30th, 2017 13:51

To you, who knows me
Fay Slimm. said:

This beautiful mantra puts love where we need it - every breath of each lovely second sees love waiting . A n uplifting read David and thanks a load for sharing this moment\'s gift.

June 30th, 2017 13:49

To you, who knows me
FredPeyer said:

What a beautiful love poem. Need to show this to my wife! (And I won\'t pretend that I wrote it!!!)

June 29th, 2017 13:31

The heart of all things
david said:

Yes, we can always have faith in the heart. It always reemerges even when it seems like it may not.
Have a wonderful day. Thank you.

June 29th, 2017 01:25

The heart of all things
Louis Gibbs said:

A beautiful, philosophical, interpretation of the unending role our heart plays ... lifetime after lifetime ... carrying our essence forward, ever increasing our soul\'s wisdom. Splendid, David!

June 25th, 2017 11:18

The heart of all things
FredPeyer said:

Incredible imagination. The heart is us and we cannot control it. It just is.

June 25th, 2017 03:21