Comments received on poems by tynika_bent
The strongest soldier.
FredPeyer said:
Fine poem Tynika. Mothers are the glue that holds humanity together! Read the poem \"Mother\" by Renzi, you will probably enjoy it!
June 27th, 2017 11:32
FredPeyer said:
Fine poem Tynika. Mothers are the glue that holds humanity together! Read the poem \"Mother\" by Renzi, you will probably enjoy it!
June 27th, 2017 11:32
hiding in the shadows
FredPeyer said:
Tynika, you do write well. Do we miss something we don\'t know? Maybe just because others have it? You aptly describe a person who is defiant while simultaneously crying for help. As a father of two boys and a daughter I honestly don\'t understand why someone would not want to be there for his kid(s). So much to gain, nothing to loose!
June 26th, 2017 11:55
FredPeyer said:
Tynika, you do write well. Do we miss something we don\'t know? Maybe just because others have it? You aptly describe a person who is defiant while simultaneously crying for help. As a father of two boys and a daughter I honestly don\'t understand why someone would not want to be there for his kid(s). So much to gain, nothing to loose!
June 26th, 2017 11:55
BLINK!!!
FredPeyer said:
I just read the other comments and yours as well where you say that you are NOT depressed. This is what makes a good writer: Imagination!!!!
Congratulations on a wonderful poem.
June 25th, 2017 20:21
FredPeyer said:
I just read the other comments and yours as well where you say that you are NOT depressed. This is what makes a good writer: Imagination!!!!
Congratulations on a wonderful poem.
June 25th, 2017 20:21
BLINK!!!
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TYNIKA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure and very poignant and true in SUBJECT. I work in College wit students aged 16 to 30 and many of them are under peer and community stress. We do council thm (M & F) about self-harm and drugs etc ~ but for some it is too late ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN ~ UK.
June 25th, 2017 17:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TYNIKA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ excellent in structure and very poignant and true in SUBJECT. I work in College wit students aged 16 to 30 and many of them are under peer and community stress. We do council thm (M & F) about self-harm and drugs etc ~ but for some it is too late ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN ~ UK.
June 25th, 2017 17:04
BLINK!!!
david said:
She is innocent.
If only she knew this.
If only she could believe this.
She is innocent.
We are all innocents.
Innocence smiles.
Innocence laughs.
Innocence understands.
Innocence empathizes,
and embraces
and heals.
June 25th, 2017 15:14
david said:
She is innocent.
If only she knew this.
If only she could believe this.
She is innocent.
We are all innocents.
Innocence smiles.
Innocence laughs.
Innocence understands.
Innocence empathizes,
and embraces
and heals.
June 25th, 2017 15:14
BLINK!!!
tynika_bent said:
I am not a depressed person just wanted to share my poetry.
June 25th, 2017 15:11
tynika_bent said:
I am not a depressed person just wanted to share my poetry.
June 25th, 2017 15:11
BLINK!!!
Louis Gibbs said:
I am astounded and saddened at the darkness displayed by the young in their poetry! The hopelessness! One can only hope it will change for the better as they make their way through life.
June 25th, 2017 14:58
Louis Gibbs said:
I am astounded and saddened at the darkness displayed by the young in their poetry! The hopelessness! One can only hope it will change for the better as they make their way through life.
June 25th, 2017 14:58
