Comments received on poems by jessiannace
Too Much
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Sometimes the strongest sound in people\'s mind is silence.
Welcome to MPS.
June 28th, 2017 00:52
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write. Sometimes the strongest sound in people\'s mind is silence.
Welcome to MPS.
June 28th, 2017 00:52
Too Much
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESS FOR AN AWESOME ~ BUT TOO SELF DEPRECATING FIRST POEM ! Your POEM is very elegant in its style ~ rhythmic free verse ~ and the content is a tough but honest CV ! The flute is my fave instrument (I hate trumpets !) so i hear you and (in my mind) you are lovely. This poem drips with honesty but I want a \"Power of Positive Thinking ~ POEM\" next time. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my POEMS ! If you have any QUESTIONS about MPS please ask ~ it is a very empathetic site ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2017 17:37
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME JESS FOR AN AWESOME ~ BUT TOO SELF DEPRECATING FIRST POEM ! Your POEM is very elegant in its style ~ rhythmic free verse ~ and the content is a tough but honest CV ! The flute is my fave instrument (I hate trumpets !) so i hear you and (in my mind) you are lovely. This poem drips with honesty but I want a \"Power of Positive Thinking ~ POEM\" next time. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my POEMS ! If you have any QUESTIONS about MPS please ask ~ it is a very empathetic site ! Every Blessing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
June 27th, 2017 17:37
Too Much
Poetic Dan said:
Those trumpets can\'t hear
Them selfs or others
The flute hears all
Nothing is filtered
It\'s because of both
I find balance
Thank you for a wonderful read, I hope you find what you need
June 27th, 2017 13:02
Poetic Dan said:
Those trumpets can\'t hear
Them selfs or others
The flute hears all
Nothing is filtered
It\'s because of both
I find balance
Thank you for a wonderful read, I hope you find what you need
June 27th, 2017 13:02
Too Much
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for a fine poem. You know, no matter how old we are, there are times we do feel exactly how you so nicely describe it. Take baby steps, from the flute you move up to saxophone before becoming a trumpet. And as a great finale, hit the drums!
June 27th, 2017 11:26
FredPeyer said:
Thank you for a fine poem. You know, no matter how old we are, there are times we do feel exactly how you so nicely describe it. Take baby steps, from the flute you move up to saxophone before becoming a trumpet. And as a great finale, hit the drums!
June 27th, 2017 11:26
