Comments received on poems by AcaciaRose
The Sorrows of Summer
FredPeyer said:
There are a LOT of adults who cannot write as beautifully as you did here. Keep on writing, would like to read more!
July 5th, 2017 11:14
FredPeyer said:
There are a LOT of adults who cannot write as beautifully as you did here. Keep on writing, would like to read more!
July 5th, 2017 11:14
The Sorrows of Summer
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your words are very good.
July 5th, 2017 07:54
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, your words are very good.
July 5th, 2017 07:54
The Sorrows of Summer
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely poem and well above 8th grade ~ full of life and rhythm. It pens a truism ~ many of us can empthise with ~ in 8th grade. Schools out but for many loneliness crept in ~ no school ~ no fun ~ no friends etc ~ so so sad. BUT AELIS that don\'t seem to me like the SASSY 22 year old who posted a poem from the past ! Please share (in a poem) just how things are TODAY ~ OK ! Thanks BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems & Fusion ~ Thanks B
July 5th, 2017 06:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Lovely poem and well above 8th grade ~ full of life and rhythm. It pens a truism ~ many of us can empthise with ~ in 8th grade. Schools out but for many loneliness crept in ~ no school ~ no fun ~ no friends etc ~ so so sad. BUT AELIS that don\'t seem to me like the SASSY 22 year old who posted a poem from the past ! Please share (in a poem) just how things are TODAY ~ OK ! Thanks BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems & Fusion ~ Thanks B
July 5th, 2017 06:55
The Sorrows of Summer
burning-embers said:
I don\'t know how long ago your 8th grade was but if you were to write those words today then i would tell you that what you DO have is the poet within you. A poet sits aside from the crowd, reflects and writes. Look into the crowd, is there another? I doubt it. Value what you are. Nice one.
July 5th, 2017 06:45
burning-embers said:
I don\'t know how long ago your 8th grade was but if you were to write those words today then i would tell you that what you DO have is the poet within you. A poet sits aside from the crowd, reflects and writes. Look into the crowd, is there another? I doubt it. Value what you are. Nice one.
July 5th, 2017 06:45
Stranded
malubotelho said:
At some point we all feel alone. Sometimes the closest person to you is the one that don\'t listen, or don\'t care. Then is when we have to be compassionate with them and with ourselves. It hurts when no one listen. I hear you. I listen to you. You are not alone.
July 2nd, 2017 16:48
malubotelho said:
At some point we all feel alone. Sometimes the closest person to you is the one that don\'t listen, or don\'t care. Then is when we have to be compassionate with them and with ourselves. It hurts when no one listen. I hear you. I listen to you. You are not alone.
July 2nd, 2017 16:48
Stranded
Louis Gibbs said:
Good description of the aloneness we all have experienced, Acacia! Well done poem. Welcome to MPS!
July 2nd, 2017 12:40
Louis Gibbs said:
Good description of the aloneness we all have experienced, Acacia! Well done poem. Welcome to MPS!
July 2nd, 2017 12:40
Stranded
Seek said:
You recognize your world and think you are alone. Many others don\'t even feel what you do. There are plenty of willing ears and readers for your wonderfully articulated sentiments.
July 2nd, 2017 10:21
Seek said:
You recognize your world and think you are alone. Many others don\'t even feel what you do. There are plenty of willing ears and readers for your wonderfully articulated sentiments.
July 2nd, 2017 10:21
Stranded
burning-embers said:
Be assured people here are listening and you\'re not alone. Unseen? - producing work like this you\'ll be noticed and for all the right reasons.
July 2nd, 2017 02:02
burning-embers said:
Be assured people here are listening and you\'re not alone. Unseen? - producing work like this you\'ll be noticed and for all the right reasons.
July 2nd, 2017 02:02
