Comments received on poems by Trev



Smoke
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Very well told.....I hope that you aren\'t still in such a dark place in life...and if you made this up, wow.....you depicted it well..

July 23rd, 2017 00:42

Enslavement
onepauly said:

enjoy yourself.
your poem has meaning.

July 10th, 2017 08:06

Enslavement
Moonflower15 said:

You are a very talented poet. again great work.

July 10th, 2017 01:01

Enslavement
andreax21 said:

This really hits home. I absolutely love this.

July 10th, 2017 00:58

Soul
LIGHT WARRIOR said:

Wow...Very moving and emotions well expressed....I sure hope that you are feeling lighter and happier today....keep writing man...you have talent

July 9th, 2017 23:57

Soul
MaddieJ said:

\"This illusion is not real, So I have to bend during this crisis.\" This part of your poem really spoke to me. I am constantly reminding myself as I struggle with depression that it isn\'t real if I don\'t let it get me down. I am on my way to enlightenment. I see that through expression, you are too! Great poem! Very real. Welcome to the site!

July 9th, 2017 23:56

Soul
Moonflower15 said:

Depression is such a heavy burden, that twists and distorts your thoughts and emotions. Great post. Thank you for sharing.

July 9th, 2017 14:13

Soul
Heather T said:

Honest and hopeful spill. Welcome! Writing is therapy.

July 9th, 2017 12:59

Soul
onepauly said:

you\'ll find a way out. you\'ve already started.

July 9th, 2017 10:26

Soul
Louis Gibbs said:

Much wisdom expressed in this fine poem, Trev! Thanks for posting.

July 9th, 2017 10:18

Soul
kevin browne said:

I hope it does for you my friend. depression is a difficult one to deal with and is very difficult to express. you, on the other hand have done it with grace. well done.

July 9th, 2017 01:11

Soul
The Broken Vessel said:

The World is better because you\'re here..Keep talking someone needs to hear you..

July 9th, 2017 01:03