Comments received on poems by Nyoko_beautiful moon
Running in the forest
dusk arising said:
Smell the freshness of the trees, feel the dampness in the air from the remaining dew upon the leafs, feel the soft undergrowth beneath your feet, hear the silence as everything holds its breath at your presence there. You are a foreigner in the forest and it rejects you until its sure of you. Walk into the forest and feel these things. When the forest accepts you it will show you many things of beauty. Write and tell us about them. I like the way you write.
September 10th, 2017 19:46
dusk arising said:
Smell the freshness of the trees, feel the dampness in the air from the remaining dew upon the leafs, feel the soft undergrowth beneath your feet, hear the silence as everything holds its breath at your presence there. You are a foreigner in the forest and it rejects you until its sure of you. Walk into the forest and feel these things. When the forest accepts you it will show you many things of beauty. Write and tell us about them. I like the way you write.
September 10th, 2017 19:46
Running in the forest
Frank Prem said:
Sounds lovely. You should do these things.
September 9th, 2017 21:03
Frank Prem said:
Sounds lovely. You should do these things.
September 9th, 2017 21:03
Imagination....
burning-embers said:
yes, if u cant imagine a goal theres nothing to aim for - simple
July 27th, 2017 11:19
burning-embers said:
yes, if u cant imagine a goal theres nothing to aim for - simple
July 27th, 2017 11:19
Fly with me
kevin browne said:
where shall we fly away to. I\'d love to go to Venus with you because your poetry is so beautiful. great write my friend.
July 26th, 2017 21:11
kevin browne said:
where shall we fly away to. I\'d love to go to Venus with you because your poetry is so beautiful. great write my friend.
July 26th, 2017 21:11
Clouds in the sky
onepauly said:
I remember as a child I used to lie on my back and watch the clouds for very long times. it gave me a feeling I\'m really a part of it. for without me where would the clouds be. happy gazeing.
July 17th, 2017 03:29
onepauly said:
I remember as a child I used to lie on my back and watch the clouds for very long times. it gave me a feeling I\'m really a part of it. for without me where would the clouds be. happy gazeing.
July 17th, 2017 03:29
Rain
kevin browne said:
rain brings the planet extended life and we can\'t thank God enough for that. for rain we have noting and you captured my thoughts on what would happen if it didn\'t. I am so happy you have rained on all of us. a great wet write showered with poetry prowess.
July 15th, 2017 20:55
kevin browne said:
rain brings the planet extended life and we can\'t thank God enough for that. for rain we have noting and you captured my thoughts on what would happen if it didn\'t. I am so happy you have rained on all of us. a great wet write showered with poetry prowess.
July 15th, 2017 20:55
Rain
Its Raskolnikov said:
Impressively simple yet also grandeuringly meaningful
July 15th, 2017 13:45
Its Raskolnikov said:
Impressively simple yet also grandeuringly meaningful
July 15th, 2017 13:45
Fireflies
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. I\'ve always loved fireflies. Your tribute to natures illuminating aspects is simple and heart-felt. Thanks for this.
July 14th, 2017 12:42
Nicholas Browning said:
I like this. I\'ve always loved fireflies. Your tribute to natures illuminating aspects is simple and heart-felt. Thanks for this.
July 14th, 2017 12:42
Have you ever ...
burning-embers said:
Oh yes i have and more. Your words are the words of a lover. And your deepest love is the beauty of life all around you. If you attune it will seduce you just as describe. As you make love in that frame of mind then the world around you makes love along with you. Truly beautiful.
July 13th, 2017 18:04
burning-embers said:
Oh yes i have and more. Your words are the words of a lover. And your deepest love is the beauty of life all around you. If you attune it will seduce you just as describe. As you make love in that frame of mind then the world around you makes love along with you. Truly beautiful.
July 13th, 2017 18:04
Have you ever ...
onepauly said:
I like the gentle wind through the trees in the summertime. you can hear harmony itself.
July 13th, 2017 18:00
onepauly said:
I like the gentle wind through the trees in the summertime. you can hear harmony itself.
July 13th, 2017 18:00
Have you ever ...
FredPeyer said:
Good poem Nyoko, makes me wonder how many more things I could have done, and how many more things I should do, before it is too late.
July 13th, 2017 14:53
FredPeyer said:
Good poem Nyoko, makes me wonder how many more things I could have done, and how many more things I should do, before it is too late.
July 13th, 2017 14:53
Wolf love
Nicholas Browning said:
The merit in this lies in the fact that is portrays love in an old fashioned ways. I got late 1900s romance movie vibes. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 16:28
Nicholas Browning said:
The merit in this lies in the fact that is portrays love in an old fashioned ways. I got late 1900s romance movie vibes. Good stuff.
July 11th, 2017 16:28
Wolf love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WLECOME NYOKO (lovely name) Thanks for your first Poem ~ Love the Wing ~ Ding presentation and the content of the poem \"My Beautiful Silver Moon\" Wolves (and foxes in the UK) do howl (and make love !) when the Moon is Full ! I love the Moon which is much more important in our lives than most people realise without the moon there would be no tides for instance ! We all howl dancing in the Moonlight ~ watching and bonding wth our Lover and receiving confidence and joy from Sister Moon keeping us faithful until our lover returns once more ~ AWESOME ! I am a MOON CHILD and consequently my \"LOVE\" is always controlled and gentle ! My Ladies tell me that ~ loving me and me loving them ~ is like being bathed in MOONLIGHT. You have touched on a very important aspect of Love in this Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleas echeck my Poems ~ Thanks B.
July 11th, 2017 15:30
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WLECOME NYOKO (lovely name) Thanks for your first Poem ~ Love the Wing ~ Ding presentation and the content of the poem \"My Beautiful Silver Moon\" Wolves (and foxes in the UK) do howl (and make love !) when the Moon is Full ! I love the Moon which is much more important in our lives than most people realise without the moon there would be no tides for instance ! We all howl dancing in the Moonlight ~ watching and bonding wth our Lover and receiving confidence and joy from Sister Moon keeping us faithful until our lover returns once more ~ AWESOME ! I am a MOON CHILD and consequently my \"LOVE\" is always controlled and gentle ! My Ladies tell me that ~ loving me and me loving them ~ is like being bathed in MOONLIGHT. You have touched on a very important aspect of Love in this Elegant Poem ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleas echeck my Poems ~ Thanks B.
July 11th, 2017 15:30
