Comments received on poems by Kaden Hudson
I\'m Tired
psychofemale said:
hang in there, it will get better, doesn\'t seem like it now, but it will. hope you feel better after this write
February 7th, 2019 19:07
psychofemale said:
hang in there, it will get better, doesn\'t seem like it now, but it will. hope you feel better after this write
February 7th, 2019 19:07
Depression (Trigger Warning)
QuietWords said:
It\'s been a long time since I\'ve come across writing so personally evocative. Don\'t give up.
November 29th, 2018 11:55
QuietWords said:
It\'s been a long time since I\'ve come across writing so personally evocative. Don\'t give up.
November 29th, 2018 11:55
Dear Dad
Poetic Dan said:
I remember this moment and many more after, I truly resonated with the passion and pain of these words.
May you break the cycle to show the person that shines in this writing.
Thanking for sharing
August 14th, 2018 15:11
Poetic Dan said:
I remember this moment and many more after, I truly resonated with the passion and pain of these words.
May you break the cycle to show the person that shines in this writing.
Thanking for sharing
August 14th, 2018 15:11
Life After Death
Louis Gibbs said:
Stay tuned to this path, and keep asking these questions, Kaden. The answers don\'t come easy, but they are there. Good poem!
October 10th, 2017 21:35
Louis Gibbs said:
Stay tuned to this path, and keep asking these questions, Kaden. The answers don\'t come easy, but they are there. Good poem!
October 10th, 2017 21:35
Cancer
Christina8 said:
You are so courageous! Awesome poem! And your daughter sounds like a real fighter! Blessings as your daughter fights this battle--Christina
September 21st, 2017 20:27
Christina8 said:
You are so courageous! Awesome poem! And your daughter sounds like a real fighter! Blessings as your daughter fights this battle--Christina
September 21st, 2017 20:27
Thunderstorm
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your love for writing and nature is as refreshing as that thunderstorm and rain in your poem. Thank you for those encouraging final two lines...God speed my brother!
September 15th, 2017 23:01
Gary Edward Geraci said:
Your love for writing and nature is as refreshing as that thunderstorm and rain in your poem. Thank you for those encouraging final two lines...God speed my brother!
September 15th, 2017 23:01
Thunderstorm
lasergraph said:
Just had a thunderstorm here not five minutes before I read this. I got to experience it twice.
September 15th, 2017 21:10
lasergraph said:
Just had a thunderstorm here not five minutes before I read this. I got to experience it twice.
September 15th, 2017 21:10
My Lost Life
FredPeyer said:
Good poem Kaden,
It makes a good point that a strong person will always get up, no matter how many times shot down.
July 15th, 2017 13:35
FredPeyer said:
Good poem Kaden,
It makes a good point that a strong person will always get up, no matter how many times shot down.
July 15th, 2017 13:35
The World We Live In
kevin browne said:
powerful statements that you need your backing up in poetry with answers given in your poem by the same way you started it. with words. then we can make a full comment with the correct ending to your work. it\'s something all poets have issues achieving, to end the poem with the same relation to the beginning. give us some answers first next time then tell us whats wrong with the world. or even better, just tell us about all the fruity things in life and how we get them. that\'s a thinker for you right there. good luck my friend.
July 12th, 2017 14:36
kevin browne said:
powerful statements that you need your backing up in poetry with answers given in your poem by the same way you started it. with words. then we can make a full comment with the correct ending to your work. it\'s something all poets have issues achieving, to end the poem with the same relation to the beginning. give us some answers first next time then tell us whats wrong with the world. or even better, just tell us about all the fruity things in life and how we get them. that\'s a thinker for you right there. good luck my friend.
July 12th, 2017 14:36
The World We Live In
FredPeyer said:
Kaden, well written, and when you are right you are right.
We can and we should rebuild this world. But where to start?
It\'s gonna be inside you, and me, and him, and her. Your poem very aptly describes the problem, now we need a blueprint to solve it.
July 12th, 2017 13:06
FredPeyer said:
Kaden, well written, and when you are right you are right.
We can and we should rebuild this world. But where to start?
It\'s gonna be inside you, and me, and him, and her. Your poem very aptly describes the problem, now we need a blueprint to solve it.
July 12th, 2017 13:06
The World We Live In
burning-embers said:
Don\'t expect anyone to change your world for you. It\'s your world, you have as much right to shape it\'s future as anyone else.You have more right to shape it than an old git like me.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
burning-embers said:
Don\'t expect anyone to change your world for you. It\'s your world, you have as much right to shape it\'s future as anyone else.You have more right to shape it than an old git like me.
July 12th, 2017 12:48
Normal
Migithehp said:
i loved it
especially the afraid of becoming the family\'s disgrace
this poem reaches me on so many levels
no im not gay but i know all about the want to be original, true to yourself and the judgement that comes with it.
i get it all the time
why do you dye/cut your hair like that
you look like a dyke
you are going to hell for those tattoos and piercings why cant you be normal
maybe i dont wanna be
dear tell those people who hold you back to go f*ck themselves (sorry for the potty mouth) just be your wonderful self its way more rewarding
July 12th, 2017 01:00
Migithehp said:
i loved it
especially the afraid of becoming the family\'s disgrace
this poem reaches me on so many levels
no im not gay but i know all about the want to be original, true to yourself and the judgement that comes with it.
i get it all the time
why do you dye/cut your hair like that
you look like a dyke
you are going to hell for those tattoos and piercings why cant you be normal
maybe i dont wanna be
dear tell those people who hold you back to go f*ck themselves (sorry for the potty mouth) just be your wonderful self its way more rewarding
July 12th, 2017 01:00
Normal
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Kaden.
Your well written poem nicely touches on an old question: What is normal? If even the dictionary lists eight definitions, it is not easy, but you made a good start.
Would like to read more from you.
July 11th, 2017 22:45
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to the site Kaden.
Your well written poem nicely touches on an old question: What is normal? If even the dictionary lists eight definitions, it is not easy, but you made a good start.
Would like to read more from you.
July 11th, 2017 22:45
Normal
Nicholas Browning said:
I personally don\'t like today\'s definition of \"Normal\". Normal has become what the majority deems it, and it\'s not a good thing. However, being \"normal\" in a sense that means your ordinary, is fine. Nothing wrong with it. Good work.
July 11th, 2017 19:14
Nicholas Browning said:
I personally don\'t like today\'s definition of \"Normal\". Normal has become what the majority deems it, and it\'s not a good thing. However, being \"normal\" in a sense that means your ordinary, is fine. Nothing wrong with it. Good work.
July 11th, 2017 19:14
Normal
burning-embers said:
Smiled at your line \'pray the gay away\'. Normal nowdays is being whatever u are so long as its legal. Society has always found something to take offence at or class at not normal be it women in trousers or wotever. People have had to stand up and fight for recognition of their right to be. This may be your fight, stand and be counted i say.
July 11th, 2017 19:11
burning-embers said:
Smiled at your line \'pray the gay away\'. Normal nowdays is being whatever u are so long as its legal. Society has always found something to take offence at or class at not normal be it women in trousers or wotever. People have had to stand up and fight for recognition of their right to be. This may be your fight, stand and be counted i say.
July 11th, 2017 19:11
