Comments received on poems by EnderGirl
Depression...
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh SWEETHEART this is such a sad Poem from someone so Young and so Beautiful ~ Love your LOGO \"Sweetheart in a Teacup\" and such beautiful EYES ~ I love EMO GIRLS ! We all LOVE YOU so there is no need to fell depressed \"Count Your Blessings\" and please don\'t cut ! If you have problems ~ share them with me ~ I am a Student Counselor _ or wit one of the Lovely ladies on MPS. Thanks for choosing my Conservation Poem as a favorite ~ Please check my Poem today. Praying for you ~ Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 17th, 2017 01:24
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh SWEETHEART this is such a sad Poem from someone so Young and so Beautiful ~ Love your LOGO \"Sweetheart in a Teacup\" and such beautiful EYES ~ I love EMO GIRLS ! We all LOVE YOU so there is no need to fell depressed \"Count Your Blessings\" and please don\'t cut ! If you have problems ~ share them with me ~ I am a Student Counselor _ or wit one of the Lovely ladies on MPS. Thanks for choosing my Conservation Poem as a favorite ~ Please check my Poem today. Praying for you ~ Brotherly HUGS ~ BRIAN (UK)
September 17th, 2017 01:24
A Sad Poem
FredPeyer said:
Endergirl this really is a sad poem, well written, but I was hoping there would be at least a tiny little light at the end. But then, not everything ends happily ever after!
July 13th, 2017 19:32
FredPeyer said:
Endergirl this really is a sad poem, well written, but I was hoping there would be at least a tiny little light at the end. But then, not everything ends happily ever after!
July 13th, 2017 19:32
The Truth
EnderGirl said:
Thanks Guys, I wrote this poem in my Language Arts/Literature class in 7th grade (i\'m in 8th grade now) I just remember writing depressing poems and then my fren told me that they were actually good. So I desired to post my first poem on this website.
July 13th, 2017 00:55
EnderGirl said:
Thanks Guys, I wrote this poem in my Language Arts/Literature class in 7th grade (i\'m in 8th grade now) I just remember writing depressing poems and then my fren told me that they were actually good. So I desired to post my first poem on this website.
July 13th, 2017 00:55
The Truth
onepauly said:
only a suggestion. if you want to sleep without the aid of drugs, try staying awake for 48 hours. then hit the hay.
July 12th, 2017 09:37
onepauly said:
only a suggestion. if you want to sleep without the aid of drugs, try staying awake for 48 hours. then hit the hay.
July 12th, 2017 09:37
The Truth
Jinx said:
I have to agree with Brian, make the best of what you have. On the same note, I must respectfully dissagree Brian. Sadness, anger, violence, and yes, even suicide are emotions and thoughts we\'ve all dealt with at times. These things do not discriminate because of age. If you can think it, then you can say it. For myself I have found no better medicine than the creative process. Don\'t ever stop putting your thoughts into words, and \'mention, mention, mention!\'. You write well, keep it up.☺
July 12th, 2017 05:33
Jinx said:
I have to agree with Brian, make the best of what you have. On the same note, I must respectfully dissagree Brian. Sadness, anger, violence, and yes, even suicide are emotions and thoughts we\'ve all dealt with at times. These things do not discriminate because of age. If you can think it, then you can say it. For myself I have found no better medicine than the creative process. Don\'t ever stop putting your thoughts into words, and \'mention, mention, mention!\'. You write well, keep it up.☺
July 12th, 2017 05:33
The Truth
burning-embers said:
Tell your troubles upon my screen
many heartaches are often seen
share your problems, bare your soul
youre amongst caring poets, one and all.
An excellent first poem here. Please let us see more.
July 12th, 2017 03:51
burning-embers said:
Tell your troubles upon my screen
many heartaches are often seen
share your problems, bare your soul
youre amongst caring poets, one and all.
An excellent first poem here. Please let us see more.
July 12th, 2017 03:51
The Truth
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly written ~ BUT ~This is such a sad sad Poem for one so Young ! SUICIDE ~ don\'t even mention it ~ just make the very best of what you have ~ YOU WILL SUCCEED ! Thinking of you Praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 12th, 2017 03:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Ohhhhhhhh FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ elegantly written ~ BUT ~This is such a sad sad Poem for one so Young ! SUICIDE ~ don\'t even mention it ~ just make the very best of what you have ~ YOU WILL SUCCEED ! Thinking of you Praying for you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
July 12th, 2017 03:04
