Comments received on poems by kpomeroy4119
Dear me
Heartwriter said:
Sometimes you have to convince your own self you are worthy. Well done, dear you!
July 7th, 2018 03:46
Heartwriter said:
Sometimes you have to convince your own self you are worthy. Well done, dear you!
July 7th, 2018 03:46
My Hormones
Frogspoetry said:
I have been there,many years ago,but I have.I think you are right it is hormones.
June 30th, 2018 11:24
Frogspoetry said:
I have been there,many years ago,but I have.I think you are right it is hormones.
June 30th, 2018 11:24
My Last note for you
Jhe said:
such heartache :-(
so beautifully written
...and validating ~
thanks for sharing!
May 27th, 2018 07:43
Jhe said:
such heartache :-(
so beautifully written
...and validating ~
thanks for sharing!
May 27th, 2018 07:43
what? why?
FredPeyer said:
kpomeroy, welcome to the site. A good poem. What I see here is a hospital room with a mother either dead or dying. I just hope it was not your mother.
As for the poem, you give a very good visual description, but I do miss a little bit of emotion and feeling. Just a thought.
July 13th, 2017 02:56
FredPeyer said:
kpomeroy, welcome to the site. A good poem. What I see here is a hospital room with a mother either dead or dying. I just hope it was not your mother.
As for the poem, you give a very good visual description, but I do miss a little bit of emotion and feeling. Just a thought.
July 13th, 2017 02:56
what? why?
burning-embers said:
It\'s wonderful dramatic writing you know and well put together. I\'m creating pictures from your words just like u want me to. But what the hecks it all about? Good though. Lets see more of you in here please.
July 13th, 2017 02:46
burning-embers said:
It\'s wonderful dramatic writing you know and well put together. I\'m creating pictures from your words just like u want me to. But what the hecks it all about? Good though. Lets see more of you in here please.
July 13th, 2017 02:46
