Comments received on poems by Poetic Misfit



Paradise
kevin browne said:

love your attitude in this poem about our children.

July 15th, 2017 21:11

When I Die(Was This What You Wanted?)
burning-embers said:

Lots of pain pours from your words here. I hope the writing of this was helpful / theraputic for you.. I know that some of my stuff on here has been for me very painful to pen. It is a good thing and people here are receptive and helpful.

July 15th, 2017 07:19

When I Die(Was This What You Wanted?)
Nicholas Browning said:

I think about my funeral as well, at times. Scary thought, but thrilling too. Many of those so called, \"What ifs?\". Fitting. Good stuff, keep it up.

July 15th, 2017 01:20

Paradise
Its Raskolnikov said:

This is beautiful, I love the subject of it in every way. Simple, yet expressive.

July 15th, 2017 00:55

Paradise
Nicholas Browning said:

First off just let me say, I was going to write a poem like this today. Great minds think alike. This subject about future children, or lovers is certainly thrilling. It\'s rare as well. Took the idea right out of my mind! The poem is fantastic. Good stuff.

July 15th, 2017 00:48