Comments received on poems by jaceykel15
Yet I smile
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS JACEY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. We were all Teens once (some of us not too long ago) so we can empathise. We all need to be loved & liked & needed because we are all Human ! The structure of your poem is elegant ~ but its message is sad. I can promise you as you develop and move into Society ~ College & Work & Love etc things do get a whole lot better ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 17th, 2017 18:08
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS JACEY ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. We were all Teens once (some of us not too long ago) so we can empathise. We all need to be loved & liked & needed because we are all Human ! The structure of your poem is elegant ~ but its message is sad. I can promise you as you develop and move into Society ~ College & Work & Love etc things do get a whole lot better ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK)
July 17th, 2017 18:08