Comments received on poems by Surucipe
Tonight I Write You Joyous Lines
L. B. Mek said:
\'ocean eyes\'
gifting us a river of words
in this pooling poem
as thanks, to a kindness
that touched a heart, with such presence
its tattooed itself, as a cherished
memento treasure
of life..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 11th, 2022 06:19
L. B. Mek said:
\'ocean eyes\'
gifting us a river of words
in this pooling poem
as thanks, to a kindness
that touched a heart, with such presence
its tattooed itself, as a cherished
memento treasure
of life..
a wonderful read, thanks for sharing
April 11th, 2022 06:19
When I Tell You I Love You
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem . Such care in your words )
November 27th, 2021 07:31
Caring dove said:
Beautiful poem . Such care in your words )
November 27th, 2021 07:31
Your Soul Burns Within My Own
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem )
Sounds like a soulmate or a twin flame ,
November 9th, 2021 15:59
Caring dove said:
Lovely poem )
Sounds like a soulmate or a twin flame ,
November 9th, 2021 15:59
Your Soul Burns Within My Own
OneMoreBreath said:
Whoever your talking about don\'t let them go they obviously mean so much to you.
October 6th, 2021 10:19
OneMoreBreath said:
Whoever your talking about don\'t let them go they obviously mean so much to you.
October 6th, 2021 10:19
Lines Written in Sunny Autumn
L. B. Mek said:
\'a mere daylight sojourn
in the cool liquid of the lake
so to be rested
and ready to resume\'..
beautifully worded, has that siesta \'ease, of life\' - feel,
thanks for sharing
September 14th, 2021 05:01
L. B. Mek said:
\'a mere daylight sojourn
in the cool liquid of the lake
so to be rested
and ready to resume\'..
beautifully worded, has that siesta \'ease, of life\' - feel,
thanks for sharing
September 14th, 2021 05:01
Lines Written in Sunny Autumn
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Surucipe, stars have magic within them.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 04:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Super words Surucipe, stars have magic within them.
Andy
September 14th, 2021 04:42
Your Hands in Mine
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing
September 7th, 2021 03:15
L. B. Mek said:
what a beautiful dedication, thanks for sharing
September 7th, 2021 03:15
Your Hands in Mine
rebmasters said:
Ah so beautiful ❤️
Love comes from the little things flowing into that vast, wonderful, unstoppable feeling
September 6th, 2021 07:52
rebmasters said:
Ah so beautiful ❤️
Love comes from the little things flowing into that vast, wonderful, unstoppable feeling
September 6th, 2021 07:52
There\'s Nothing That I Wouldn\'t Do
Nicholas Browning said:
This put a smile on my face. A lovely piece, indeed.
September 3rd, 2021 00:27
Nicholas Browning said:
This put a smile on my face. A lovely piece, indeed.
September 3rd, 2021 00:27
Lines Written by the Lake
L. B. Mek said:
\'The delicate lull of unhurried boats,
The rapid wings of the birds that circle,
Or the charm of a tongue-tied salute
from a fellow silence-loving passerby.
Thoughts here are deep,
As deep as the waters that surround and serenade,
And though sound here is fiction,
More is said and spoken,\'..
(nature\'s wisdom: infinite
our capacity to notice, limitless
how much, do we actually observe and utilise
far - far, too little..)
thanks for sharing
August 30th, 2021 06:58
L. B. Mek said:
\'The delicate lull of unhurried boats,
The rapid wings of the birds that circle,
Or the charm of a tongue-tied salute
from a fellow silence-loving passerby.
Thoughts here are deep,
As deep as the waters that surround and serenade,
And though sound here is fiction,
More is said and spoken,\'..
(nature\'s wisdom: infinite
our capacity to notice, limitless
how much, do we actually observe and utilise
far - far, too little..)
thanks for sharing
August 30th, 2021 06:58
Writing Born of Contentment
L. B. Mek said:
\'The view is vast,
And the hills tall enough to question comprehension.
A fine summer’s day is unparalleled,
When all the world’s charms combine and combust.\'
(wonderfully worded
of those small bites of wondrous Nature
that fuel our defiant hopes,
\'exiguous\': indeed!)
thanks for choosing to share, such a poetically nourishing read
August 27th, 2021 03:42
L. B. Mek said:
\'The view is vast,
And the hills tall enough to question comprehension.
A fine summer’s day is unparalleled,
When all the world’s charms combine and combust.\'
(wonderfully worded
of those small bites of wondrous Nature
that fuel our defiant hopes,
\'exiguous\': indeed!)
thanks for choosing to share, such a poetically nourishing read
August 27th, 2021 03:42
Oh Not To Be A Seagull
L. B. Mek said:
\'All that commotion for a scrap of bread,
I won’t ever understand it,
I’m not convinced they do.
Though I’m sure they eat handsomely, the seagulls,
They always seem to want more,
Their greed unchallenged by a limit.\'
(so insightful
it\'s verging: on that cyclically prophetic
of all-things
ancestrally bequeathed - pulsating hematic...)
Brilliant!
July 19th, 2021 05:09
L. B. Mek said:
\'All that commotion for a scrap of bread,
I won’t ever understand it,
I’m not convinced they do.
Though I’m sure they eat handsomely, the seagulls,
They always seem to want more,
Their greed unchallenged by a limit.\'
(so insightful
it\'s verging: on that cyclically prophetic
of all-things
ancestrally bequeathed - pulsating hematic...)
Brilliant!
July 19th, 2021 05:09
Oh Not To Be A Seagull
Doggerel Dave said:
Great read! And you continue to be \'content here\' Tuned into that stanza completely, nicely framed by the rest of the piece.
July 18th, 2021 20:07
Doggerel Dave said:
Great read! And you continue to be \'content here\' Tuned into that stanza completely, nicely framed by the rest of the piece.
July 18th, 2021 20:07
Don\'t Wait to Talk
Goldfinch60 said:
These things do happen but a word can break that silence and lead to such wonderful times - speak that word.
Andy
September 21st, 2020 00:25
Goldfinch60 said:
These things do happen but a word can break that silence and lead to such wonderful times - speak that word.
Andy
September 21st, 2020 00:25
Is Anything Planned?
FredPeyer said:
And you have been playing games with my head reading your poem! I do like it a lot, good writing, very interesting metaphors.
November 22nd, 2017 12:40
FredPeyer said:
And you have been playing games with my head reading your poem! I do like it a lot, good writing, very interesting metaphors.
November 22nd, 2017 12:40
Shattered Anamnesis
Surucipe said:
Thanks Fred, it was a difficult one to write this one. I hope I got there in the end.
October 16th, 2017 12:25
Surucipe said:
Thanks Fred, it was a difficult one to write this one. I hope I got there in the end.
October 16th, 2017 12:25
Shattered Anamnesis
FredPeyer said:
I too had to look up that word. Found two meanings: 1. remembering things from a previous lifetime, 2. account of medical history.
Am assuming you are referring to memories of past lifetimes.
The opening line is great, also like the line \'I fear crystals will never be clear again\'.
Well written, I do like your poem!
October 16th, 2017 10:48
FredPeyer said:
I too had to look up that word. Found two meanings: 1. remembering things from a previous lifetime, 2. account of medical history.
Am assuming you are referring to memories of past lifetimes.
The opening line is great, also like the line \'I fear crystals will never be clear again\'.
Well written, I do like your poem!
October 16th, 2017 10:48
Shattered Anamnesis
Heather T said:
Kudos to you for increasing my vocabulary by one today! My slam bang favorite line was your opening:
\"Flashbacks sting a ruined tune\"
October 15th, 2017 22:04
Heather T said:
Kudos to you for increasing my vocabulary by one today! My slam bang favorite line was your opening:
\"Flashbacks sting a ruined tune\"
October 15th, 2017 22:04
What I Want
FredPeyer said:
This poem is simply amazing, S.!
Read it a few times. The last stanza is so good, it could stand on its own. You are an incredible writer.
October 7th, 2017 14:56
FredPeyer said:
This poem is simply amazing, S.!
Read it a few times. The last stanza is so good, it could stand on its own. You are an incredible writer.
October 7th, 2017 14:56
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