Comments received on poems by Surucipe



O She!
FredPeyer said:

S, well written, well rhymed, and intriguing. Can\'t ask for anything better.

September 25th, 2017 17:06

O She!
orchidee said:

A fine write S. Oohh, you should have sailed round the local duck pond instead. You wouldn\'t get lost then! heehee.

September 25th, 2017 08:43

I\'ve Taken A Risk!
Accidental Poet said:

Great write Surucipe, I too am normally not one for taking risks, but sometimes you just have to go for it. Enjoy! ; )

September 20th, 2017 18:19

I\'ve Taken A Risk!
orchidee said:

What you up to? You gone surfing \'riding the wave\'?! heehee. Good write S.

September 20th, 2017 10:16

Just A Burden
Seek said:

Sadness well articulated is a work of art.

September 14th, 2017 09:31

I Just Can\'t Get Enough
orchidee said:

Ooh what is I you will always have, will always need, can\'t get enough of? Should I try some? Will I like it, etc, etc? I might have to swoon if it\'s anything even remotely \'hot\'. lol

September 1st, 2017 11:53

It\'s All The Process
orchidee said:

You got that light? We\'ll set off together through that fog then! Good write S.

August 24th, 2017 08:53

Golden Hill
burning-embers said:

Lovely writing. I love the notion of a golden hill which you have conjoured.
When i find my partner i expect i\'ll find this golden hill.

August 21st, 2017 21:31

Golden Hill
orchidee said:

Good write S.

August 21st, 2017 14:15

Are you there?
myself and me said:

Keep sailing, you will reach the dock
Keep the key safe till you find the lock
Keep the searching, you will meet your prevailing
At the end, you will be saved from craving

Please let us know when you figure out the answer.

Nice writing.

August 20th, 2017 21:46

Are you there?
orchidee said:

A fine write S. I say sometimes - Ain\'t nobody here but us mice. Maybe the place has rats?!

August 20th, 2017 13:48

Are you there?
burning-embers said:

Aint nobody here but us chickens (music) . Nice one

August 20th, 2017 05:14

I Wonder When
Nicholas Browning said:

I feel where you\'re coming from. Nicely said.

August 18th, 2017 05:28

A Pursuit of Pleasure
Nicholas Browning said:

Well then. What exactly is the pleasure that you\'re looking for? The word \"Hedonist\" Implies that the pleasure that is sought can differ from person to person.

August 16th, 2017 09:38

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