Time
Accidental Poet said:

I love poetry about time. So strange how it can seem to slow down when you want it to go by fast, or go by in the blink of an eye when you want it to by slow. Beautiful write Lucky.

August 3rd, 2017 21:04

Promise
burning-embers said:

Lovely simple way of wanting life to be. But life\'s no fairy tale its hard work and often poor rewards. However it is still lovely to see such thoughts expressed here.

July 27th, 2017 03:47

Promise
Nathan Fairchild said:

Very relatable. I feel as though everyone should strive for such loyalty, such commitment. The problem is most people take problems they had from a previous relationship into the new one. This poem is nicely written and looks at things from a more positive, optimistic stand point. Which is the best way to start a new relationship. My favorite line is \"Making room in our lives for 2 becoming 1\".

July 26th, 2017 22:08

Catch my Breath
Moonflower15 said:

I lived this as I read the words. Great work.

July 25th, 2017 23:21