Comments received on poems by singingbird
Cage , trappped
little lay lay said:
nothing resonates within me that i can relate
October 23rd, 2018 11:15
little lay lay said:
nothing resonates within me that i can relate
October 23rd, 2018 11:15
Cage , trappped
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SINGINGBIRD ~ Thanks for our first POEM. It seems rather paradoxical that A SINGINGBIRD ~ should be trapped in a Cage and too sad & disorientated to SING ! We can empathise because it happens (from time to time to all of us !). Some times its our own fault ~ sometimes Society ! I thank GOD I have never been trapped for long ~ BUT with \"A little help from my Friends & Family & God ~ I have always broken FREE and Im FREE today ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ Please visit our site. You can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK
October 23rd, 2018 10:15
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SINGINGBIRD ~ Thanks for our first POEM. It seems rather paradoxical that A SINGINGBIRD ~ should be trapped in a Cage and too sad & disorientated to SING ! We can empathise because it happens (from time to time to all of us !). Some times its our own fault ~ sometimes Society ! I thank GOD I have never been trapped for long ~ BUT with \"A little help from my Friends & Family & God ~ I have always broken FREE and Im FREE today ! Thinking of you thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN MPS works by reading and commenting on each others Poems ~ Please visit our site. You can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK
October 23rd, 2018 10:15
Cage , trappped
sylviasearcher said:
This worked well. The absence of punctuation heightened that anxious breathless feeling. I felt lost.
Great introduction.
October 23rd, 2018 10:03
sylviasearcher said:
This worked well. The absence of punctuation heightened that anxious breathless feeling. I felt lost.
Great introduction.
October 23rd, 2018 10:03
