Comments received on poems by Anonymous18
His \'I Love You\'
FredPeyer said:
A, this well written poem makes me realize how many times we say these three words without even thinking, as if we were on automatic pilot.
Thank you for reminding us that we should think before we talk and mean what we say.
December 7th, 2017 20:45
FredPeyer said:
A, this well written poem makes me realize how many times we say these three words without even thinking, as if we were on automatic pilot.
Thank you for reminding us that we should think before we talk and mean what we say.
December 7th, 2017 20:45
Awhile
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back A! Am looking forward to your witty little lines!
December 7th, 2017 19:48
FredPeyer said:
Welcome back A! Am looking forward to your witty little lines!
December 7th, 2017 19:48
To Be Honest
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Anonymous, I read it aloud, real fast, and it has a great RAP feeling to it. Maybe you should put it into music.
August 11th, 2017 11:42
FredPeyer said:
Great writing Anonymous, I read it aloud, real fast, and it has a great RAP feeling to it. Maybe you should put it into music.
August 11th, 2017 11:42
To Be Honest
Darksidepoet said:
i like what ur writing, street is risky, but u got the right mix, only my own views though i am new to this and urs is first poem i have read and commented!x
August 10th, 2017 21:38
Darksidepoet said:
i like what ur writing, street is risky, but u got the right mix, only my own views though i am new to this and urs is first poem i have read and commented!x
August 10th, 2017 21:38
My House
FredPeyer said:
Interesting poem, well written, showing how it feels to reach bottom. But at least there is an alternative to \"so long\", it is the fact that the only direction left is up.
August 1st, 2017 18:48
FredPeyer said:
Interesting poem, well written, showing how it feels to reach bottom. But at least there is an alternative to \"so long\", it is the fact that the only direction left is up.
August 1st, 2017 18:48
Poetry
onepauly said:
this poem in itself is remarkable, you have found the right words to put down. I find a lesson in this. it inspires me to the utmost. great stuff!
July 30th, 2017 19:27
onepauly said:
this poem in itself is remarkable, you have found the right words to put down. I find a lesson in this. it inspires me to the utmost. great stuff!
July 30th, 2017 19:27
Poetry
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, you\'ve been bitten by the poetry bug. Good job.
July 30th, 2017 17:43
Accidental Poet said:
Yes, you\'ve been bitten by the poetry bug. Good job.
July 30th, 2017 17:43
To Be A Slave
FredPeyer said:
As you say in your comment, this IS a very powerful poem. Everything you say is right. The sad part is that slavery still exists and that we seem to be unable to stop it completely.
July 30th, 2017 02:20
FredPeyer said:
As you say in your comment, this IS a very powerful poem. Everything you say is right. The sad part is that slavery still exists and that we seem to be unable to stop it completely.
July 30th, 2017 02:20
The Silent March Of 1917, July 28th
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write highlighting the problem - has it been solved though?
July 29th, 2017 00:51
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write highlighting the problem - has it been solved though?
July 29th, 2017 00:51
The Silent March Of 1917, July 28th
niallprideaux said:
Amazing and written brilliantly :)
July 28th, 2017 16:29
niallprideaux said:
Amazing and written brilliantly :)
July 28th, 2017 16:29
To Be A Slave
Agent of Chaos said:
Daaamn. That\'s deep dude. The rhymes are great too. Best poem I\'ve seen on here.
July 27th, 2017 21:26
Agent of Chaos said:
Daaamn. That\'s deep dude. The rhymes are great too. Best poem I\'ve seen on here.
July 27th, 2017 21:26
The Reaper
burning-embers said:
If you fear the grim reaper, then may i suggest you read about reincarnation. You just might lose less sleep.
July 27th, 2017 06:31
burning-embers said:
If you fear the grim reaper, then may i suggest you read about reincarnation. You just might lose less sleep.
July 27th, 2017 06:31
The Reaper
Bibbeck said:
Welcome Anonymous18!
Thanks for making \'My Shadow\' your favourite. In my author comments asking who it was, I was thinking the Grim Reaper - how strange - and then I read yours.
A good first write, but I pray that you don\'t meet either of these characters any time soon.
July 26th, 2017 13:04
Bibbeck said:
Welcome Anonymous18!
Thanks for making \'My Shadow\' your favourite. In my author comments asking who it was, I was thinking the Grim Reaper - how strange - and then I read yours.
A good first write, but I pray that you don\'t meet either of these characters any time soon.
July 26th, 2017 13:04
