Comments received on poems by Turtle
sands of time
Jhe said:
i got the impression you were so mesmerized by the sand that you lost track of time & that your mind drifted away from any sense-of-self... until one of your mental meanderings touched on something relating to the present and, plop, there you were, back in the here and now
at least, as someone who gets entranced like that from time to time, that\'s what i imagine it\'s saying ~ that was my long winded way of saying i liked it ;)
May 18th, 2018 17:59
Jhe said:
i got the impression you were so mesmerized by the sand that you lost track of time & that your mind drifted away from any sense-of-self... until one of your mental meanderings touched on something relating to the present and, plop, there you were, back in the here and now
at least, as someone who gets entranced like that from time to time, that\'s what i imagine it\'s saying ~ that was my long winded way of saying i liked it ;)
May 18th, 2018 17:59
BRINGER OF DREAMS
SLR said:
Great write. The descriptive images and word combinations are powerful. Great post.
May 15th, 2018 21:37
SLR said:
Great write. The descriptive images and word combinations are powerful. Great post.
May 15th, 2018 21:37
BRINGER OF DREAMS
JewishHippie6669 said:
I love the main idea although it makes me sad
May 14th, 2018 13:00
JewishHippie6669 said:
I love the main idea although it makes me sad
May 14th, 2018 13:00
sands of time
SLR said:
I think more of us feel this way than is thought. Outside ourselves. Observing ourselves without feeling control or even sometimes a connection. Great work!
May 13th, 2018 17:45
SLR said:
I think more of us feel this way than is thought. Outside ourselves. Observing ourselves without feeling control or even sometimes a connection. Great work!
May 13th, 2018 17:45
NEVER SO LOST
SLR said:
\"I\'m plagued by life and loved by death, the pain it finds every breath.\" Powerful, evocative line. So many powerful lines. It\'s gripping. Hard to find the right words to express how this one grabbed me. I\'m kinda left speechless. Great, great write today!
May 12th, 2018 21:39
SLR said:
\"I\'m plagued by life and loved by death, the pain it finds every breath.\" Powerful, evocative line. So many powerful lines. It\'s gripping. Hard to find the right words to express how this one grabbed me. I\'m kinda left speechless. Great, great write today!
May 12th, 2018 21:39
SEA OF SADNESS
SLR said:
It\'s sad but had a hopeful and triumphant ending. Conquered the chaos, treading water, no longer lost and finally free! You\'ve done it again. Beautifully written!
May 11th, 2018 22:40
SLR said:
It\'s sad but had a hopeful and triumphant ending. Conquered the chaos, treading water, no longer lost and finally free! You\'ve done it again. Beautifully written!
May 11th, 2018 22:40
SEA OF SADNESS
kitcat said:
What a wonderful poem so much emotion so very sad but I really enjoyed reading it
May 11th, 2018 15:29
kitcat said:
What a wonderful poem so much emotion so very sad but I really enjoyed reading it
May 11th, 2018 15:29
THE FIRE
Lorna said:
Lovely play on shadows and light - great description Turtle.......
May 11th, 2018 04:55
Lorna said:
Lovely play on shadows and light - great description Turtle.......
May 11th, 2018 04:55
dreams
SLR said:
It\'s so sad to me that many people are so busy planning for the future that they forget to enjoy the blessings they have while they have them. Love finds you when you\'re not looking.
May 10th, 2018 21:53
SLR said:
It\'s so sad to me that many people are so busy planning for the future that they forget to enjoy the blessings they have while they have them. Love finds you when you\'re not looking.
May 10th, 2018 21:53
Mommy\'s story
SLR said:
Heart wrenching! All I can say after reading this. You are gifted. LOVE, LOVE this. Thank you for sharing your gift.
May 10th, 2018 21:48
SLR said:
Heart wrenching! All I can say after reading this. You are gifted. LOVE, LOVE this. Thank you for sharing your gift.
May 10th, 2018 21:48
Haunting grace
SLR said:
I just joined poetic side a few days ago but I\'ve been reading as many pieces as possible. I found this one. Beautifully tragic. Love it.
May 10th, 2018 21:44
SLR said:
I just joined poetic side a few days ago but I\'ve been reading as many pieces as possible. I found this one. Beautifully tragic. Love it.
May 10th, 2018 21:44
song birds
SLR said:
I love this! I really like your style, the voice that you write with.
May 8th, 2018 22:00
SLR said:
I love this! I really like your style, the voice that you write with.
May 8th, 2018 22:00
THE PUPPETEER
SLR said:
I really like the flow of the words. Has a nice cadence, and I think most of us can relate to the feeling of not having control of our own lives at times. Thank you for posting this, I really like it.
May 8th, 2018 07:41
SLR said:
I really like the flow of the words. Has a nice cadence, and I think most of us can relate to the feeling of not having control of our own lives at times. Thank you for posting this, I really like it.
May 8th, 2018 07:41
SMILING IS A LIE
onepauly said:
sometimes crying helps clear the mind of negative emotions.
May 5th, 2018 10:28
onepauly said:
sometimes crying helps clear the mind of negative emotions.
May 5th, 2018 10:28
dreams
willyweed said:
nice poem, good form and structure also meter and rhyme are presented well. write on ww
May 4th, 2018 20:45
willyweed said:
nice poem, good form and structure also meter and rhyme are presented well. write on ww
May 4th, 2018 20:45
Haunting grace
Heather T said:
Your sorrow sings through your words. Wrenching first offering. Welcome to MPS.
July 31st, 2017 21:09
Heather T said:
Your sorrow sings through your words. Wrenching first offering. Welcome to MPS.
July 31st, 2017 21:09
Haunting grace
Kaytay17 said:
Hello, and welcome! I must say that is a beautiful piece that almost left me in tears I will be looking forward to more of your writings
xoxo~kay
July 31st, 2017 16:27
Kaytay17 said:
Hello, and welcome! I must say that is a beautiful piece that almost left me in tears I will be looking forward to more of your writings
xoxo~kay
July 31st, 2017 16:27
