Comments received on poems by demi
Not Our Last Goodbye
Simple-Man87 said:
That was incredible. It gave me goosebumps, the line with the \"I do.\" You are very talented.
August 2nd, 2017 14:06
Simple-Man87 said:
That was incredible. It gave me goosebumps, the line with the \"I do.\" You are very talented.
August 2nd, 2017 14:06
Not Our Last Goodbye
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEMI Thanks for your first poem ! Love the Structure it is bursting with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should. The Subject while sad paints a lovely picture of a NAN you loved and enjoyed ! Also there is a Faith & Hope in your heart that one day you will be reunited in Heaven ~ AMEN. We can all empathise with you DEMI ~ because most of us have experienced the loss of a loved one in the Family and Friends. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ MPS is a very caring site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 2nd, 2017 13:54
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DEMI Thanks for your first poem ! Love the Structure it is bursting with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should. The Subject while sad paints a lovely picture of a NAN you loved and enjoyed ! Also there is a Faith & Hope in your heart that one day you will be reunited in Heaven ~ AMEN. We can all empathise with you DEMI ~ because most of us have experienced the loss of a loved one in the Family and Friends. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ MPS is a very caring site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 2nd, 2017 13:54
Not Our Last Goodbye
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to your Nan, demi! I\'m sure she appreciates it. Welcome to MPS!
August 2nd, 2017 13:52
Louis Gibbs said:
A lovely tribute to your Nan, demi! I\'m sure she appreciates it. Welcome to MPS!
August 2nd, 2017 13:52
