Comments received on poems by tanvir H
Don\'t Look Back
FredPeyer said:
Like the title and the song, tanvir! One should never look back, both in writing and in life.
December 5th, 2017 04:37
FredPeyer said:
Like the title and the song, tanvir! One should never look back, both in writing and in life.
December 5th, 2017 04:37
Never Gonna Lie To You
Mugsdaddy said:
I\'m not much on lyrics but I have to say this I\'d really good if I had any criticism I would say expand on your chorus you\'ve got a little more room there to build on emotion all in all excellent job.
Mugsdaddy
October 7th, 2017 22:00
Mugsdaddy said:
I\'m not much on lyrics but I have to say this I\'d really good if I had any criticism I would say expand on your chorus you\'ve got a little more room there to build on emotion all in all excellent job.
Mugsdaddy
October 7th, 2017 22:00
I cried for your love
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes love brings us pain, we get through it,it changes us a little.
liked your write
October 7th, 2017 19:42
ron parrish aka wordman said:
sometimes love brings us pain, we get through it,it changes us a little.
liked your write
October 7th, 2017 19:42
Never Gonna Lie To You
FredPeyer said:
Great lyrics, tanvir! And Hood, I think it is just awesome and so nice of you to mentor tanvir.
tanvir, I can\'t wait to hear these lyrics with music. Promis to post the tune here once it is recorded.
October 6th, 2017 22:18
FredPeyer said:
Great lyrics, tanvir! And Hood, I think it is just awesome and so nice of you to mentor tanvir.
tanvir, I can\'t wait to hear these lyrics with music. Promis to post the tune here once it is recorded.
October 6th, 2017 22:18
I cried for your love
malubotelho said:
Tanvir, soon, very soon , you will find somebody else to fill in the gap. I hope. Well, it always happen. I like to read your poems. I do.
September 26th, 2017 21:38
malubotelho said:
Tanvir, soon, very soon , you will find somebody else to fill in the gap. I hope. Well, it always happen. I like to read your poems. I do.
September 26th, 2017 21:38
I cried for your love
FredPeyer said:
Well written, tanvir!
Unfortunately there are times in life where it really is too late. Some situations can be fixed, others not.
September 26th, 2017 21:29
FredPeyer said:
Well written, tanvir!
Unfortunately there are times in life where it really is too late. Some situations can be fixed, others not.
September 26th, 2017 21:29
life is life
FredPeyer said:
So true, our lives are like moments in time. Do we want them to be moments of happiness or moments of sadness? It is up to us.
Well written with a lot of meaning, tanvir!
September 16th, 2017 21:34
FredPeyer said:
So true, our lives are like moments in time. Do we want them to be moments of happiness or moments of sadness? It is up to us.
Well written with a lot of meaning, tanvir!
September 16th, 2017 21:34
we have one soul
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i really liked this message,two bodies,one soul
September 16th, 2017 21:26
ron parrish aka wordman said:
i really liked this message,two bodies,one soul
September 16th, 2017 21:26
life is life
rrodriguez said:
True... so don\'t postpone joy, live it today... Nicely done...
September 16th, 2017 21:15
rrodriguez said:
True... so don\'t postpone joy, live it today... Nicely done...
September 16th, 2017 21:15
we have one soul
FredPeyer said:
Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!
September 13th, 2017 17:52
FredPeyer said:
Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!
September 13th, 2017 17:52
Worth of something
Thoff1 said:
Everyone\'s life is worth something we just have to find what we are called to do.
September 8th, 2017 23:23
Thoff1 said:
Everyone\'s life is worth something we just have to find what we are called to do.
September 8th, 2017 23:23
You didn\'t understand
Michael Edwards said:
Pithy write - enjoyed reading it.
September 8th, 2017 00:21
Michael Edwards said:
Pithy write - enjoyed reading it.
September 8th, 2017 00:21
You didn\'t understand
FredPeyer said:
Well said. Love is simply accepted, while hate is not.
September 7th, 2017 20:46
FredPeyer said:
Well said. Love is simply accepted, while hate is not.
September 7th, 2017 20:46
The side of darkness
FredPeyer said:
You are right, some people just don\'t see it or don\'t get it. So, do you have to be in the light to see it?
September 5th, 2017 21:24
FredPeyer said:
You are right, some people just don\'t see it or don\'t get it. So, do you have to be in the light to see it?
September 5th, 2017 21:24
If you are smiling
FredPeyer said:
Tanvir, you nailed it! If only the whole world would follow this advise!
Great poem!
September 4th, 2017 20:59
FredPeyer said:
Tanvir, you nailed it! If only the whole world would follow this advise!
Great poem!
September 4th, 2017 20:59
If you are smiling
Christina K said:
i love this! so short and simple but it says so much. great work
September 4th, 2017 20:38
Christina K said:
i love this! so short and simple but it says so much. great work
September 4th, 2017 20:38
you are the most I need the most
FredPeyer said:
This poem is really beautiful, tanvir.
August 26th, 2017 20:13
FredPeyer said:
This poem is really beautiful, tanvir.
August 26th, 2017 20:13
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