Comments received on poems by tanvir H



I\'ve never told you
rrodriguez said:

Excellent poem of 💘

March 24th, 2018 21:16

Don\'t Look Back
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sweet words of love

December 9th, 2017 01:03

Don\'t Look Back
FredPeyer said:

Like the title and the song, tanvir! One should never look back, both in writing and in life.

December 5th, 2017 04:37

Don\'t Look Back
myself and me said:

could be a lovely song.

December 4th, 2017 19:46

Never Gonna Lie To You
Mugsdaddy said:

I\'m not much on lyrics but I have to say this I\'d really good if I had any criticism I would say expand on your chorus you\'ve got a little more room there to build on emotion all in all excellent job.
Mugsdaddy

October 7th, 2017 22:00

I cried for your love
ron parrish aka wordman said:

sometimes love brings us pain, we get through it,it changes us a little.
liked your write

October 7th, 2017 19:42

Never Gonna Lie To You
Candlewitch said:

dear tanvir,

for a first song...this is amazing! I would not have known it had you not told us! really great, loved the structure! keep up the excellent work. Hood is a great mentor, too!

*hugs, Cat

October 7th, 2017 13:48

Never Gonna Lie To You
FredPeyer said:

Great lyrics, tanvir! And Hood, I think it is just awesome and so nice of you to mentor tanvir.
tanvir, I can\'t wait to hear these lyrics with music. Promis to post the tune here once it is recorded.

October 6th, 2017 22:18

Never Gonna Lie To You
LAWLESS said:

I\'m not much of a songwriter, but Hood is. This could be a catchy tune. See you on the Billboard 100.

Lawless

October 6th, 2017 21:09

Never Gonna Lie To You
tanvir H said:

By Me assisted by HOOD

October 6th, 2017 17:20

I cried for your love
malubotelho said:

Tanvir, soon, very soon , you will find somebody else to fill in the gap. I hope. Well, it always happen. I like to read your poems. I do.

September 26th, 2017 21:38

I cried for your love
FredPeyer said:

Well written, tanvir!
Unfortunately there are times in life where it really is too late. Some situations can be fixed, others not.

September 26th, 2017 21:29

life is life
FredPeyer said:

So true, our lives are like moments in time. Do we want them to be moments of happiness or moments of sadness? It is up to us.
Well written with a lot of meaning, tanvir!

September 16th, 2017 21:34

we have one soul
ron parrish aka wordman said:

i really liked this message,two bodies,one soul

September 16th, 2017 21:26

life is life
ron parrish aka wordman said:

good message

September 16th, 2017 21:24

life is life
rrodriguez said:

True... so don\'t postpone joy, live it today... Nicely done...

September 16th, 2017 21:15

we have one soul
rrodriguez said:

Nicely done!

September 14th, 2017 22:08

we have one soul
malubotelho said:

Nice writing Tanvir. A cute short one.

September 13th, 2017 23:29

we have one soul
FredPeyer said:

Rancor, agree with James, otherwise a great poem!

September 13th, 2017 17:52

we have one soul
LAWLESS said:

Very well delivered! One change that I would make, is to change the word \"breath\" to breathe. They are pronounced differently with different meanings. Body or bodies? Just trying to help. Cuz is cool though!

Lawless

September 13th, 2017 16:35

Worth of something
Thoff1 said:

Everyone\'s life is worth something we just have to find what we are called to do.

September 8th, 2017 23:23

You didn\'t understand
Michael Edwards said:

Pithy write - enjoyed reading it.

September 8th, 2017 00:21

You didn\'t understand
FredPeyer said:

Well said. Love is simply accepted, while hate is not.

September 7th, 2017 20:46

The side of darkness
FredPeyer said:

You are right, some people just don\'t see it or don\'t get it. So, do you have to be in the light to see it?

September 5th, 2017 21:24

If you are smiling
FredPeyer said:

Tanvir, you nailed it! If only the whole world would follow this advise!
Great poem!

September 4th, 2017 20:59

If you are smiling
Christina K said:

i love this! so short and simple but it says so much. great work

September 4th, 2017 20:38

I always loved you
Simple-Man87 said:

I loved it. Very well done.

August 29th, 2017 18:29

I always loved you
FredPeyer said:

Very nice declaration of love, tanvir!

August 29th, 2017 02:09

I always loved you
poetrylover123 said:

We\'ve all got that person

August 27th, 2017 23:22

I always loved you
WL Schuett said:

Yes a good heartfelt poem

August 27th, 2017 12:56

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