Comments received on poems by Unwanted666
My Existence
myself and me said:
You have experienced one side of life, the bad side, now it\'s time to live the good side. In the dark too long, light might too bright for your eye. Well expression.
August 8th, 2017 20:02
myself and me said:
You have experienced one side of life, the bad side, now it\'s time to live the good side. In the dark too long, light might too bright for your eye. Well expression.
August 8th, 2017 20:02
My Existence
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS MISS VANA ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. MPS is a very empathetic site so you will probably get lots of TLC ~ because that\'s how we are ! Your poem is elegantly penned in Rhyming Couplets (my fave) and it has plenty of rhythm ! So far so good ! The contents however is full of angst and recrimination against Mankind & God ~ WHY ? I agree we do live in a Wicked World and people are selfish and despise \"weakness\" because it challenges all their ME ME ME motives. There is a GOD and his plans for all of us are only GOOD ~ I will pray for you ! We all experience difficulties in our lives ~ BUT ~ when I count my Blessings (and you must have some ?) I realise (despite some negatives) I\'m better off than 90% of the Worlds POPULATION otherwise i would not be on this site ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ I trust your next 22 years will give you some cause for JOY & HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 17:41
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS MISS VANA ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM. MPS is a very empathetic site so you will probably get lots of TLC ~ because that\'s how we are ! Your poem is elegantly penned in Rhyming Couplets (my fave) and it has plenty of rhythm ! So far so good ! The contents however is full of angst and recrimination against Mankind & God ~ WHY ? I agree we do live in a Wicked World and people are selfish and despise \"weakness\" because it challenges all their ME ME ME motives. There is a GOD and his plans for all of us are only GOOD ~ I will pray for you ! We all experience difficulties in our lives ~ BUT ~ when I count my Blessings (and you must have some ?) I realise (despite some negatives) I\'m better off than 90% of the Worlds POPULATION otherwise i would not be on this site ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ I trust your next 22 years will give you some cause for JOY & HAPPINESS ~ BRIAN
August 8th, 2017 17:41
My Existence
Louis Gibbs said:
A tough entry into this world described herein. Good poem, Miss Vana! No better way to let it out than in expressing through poetry. Welcome to MPS!
August 8th, 2017 16:06
Louis Gibbs said:
A tough entry into this world described herein. Good poem, Miss Vana! No better way to let it out than in expressing through poetry. Welcome to MPS!
August 8th, 2017 16:06
