Comments received on poems by lucifer very very very 1st
a poison paradise
dusk arising said:
Once again none of your words are from the \'middle ages\'
September 1st, 2019 05:35
dusk arising said:
Once again none of your words are from the \'middle ages\'
September 1st, 2019 05:35
there will be a great terror
dusk arising said:
You are misleading yourself if you believe this is using middle ages words. Perhaps you should read up on the subject.
August 11th, 2019 14:01
dusk arising said:
You are misleading yourself if you believe this is using middle ages words. Perhaps you should read up on the subject.
August 11th, 2019 14:01
ground knowledge,ground game
dusk arising said:
Full of romance and heartache, i feel the pain.
July 24th, 2019 01:21
dusk arising said:
Full of romance and heartache, i feel the pain.
July 24th, 2019 01:21
a weekend of lust
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FRIEND for a very intersting POETIC STYLE on a perrenial SUBJECT ~ Lust ~ Obsession ~ Romance ~ Love ! These are very *Old Fashioned Words* in the poetic vocabulary of LOVE ! We overuse capitalization and a Poem sans capitals & punctuation looks very very cool ! Repetition is important in Classical Poetry and your repetion of the *LOVE WORDS* and your additional repetition of *weekday* *weekend* and *day-to-day* *tale & tale of the day* makes this a great medievil (middle ages) poem !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 17:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FRIEND for a very intersting POETIC STYLE on a perrenial SUBJECT ~ Lust ~ Obsession ~ Romance ~ Love ! These are very *Old Fashioned Words* in the poetic vocabulary of LOVE ! We overuse capitalization and a Poem sans capitals & punctuation looks very very cool ! Repetition is important in Classical Poetry and your repetion of the *LOVE WORDS* and your additional repetition of *weekday* *weekend* and *day-to-day* *tale & tale of the day* makes this a great medievil (middle ages) poem !
Thanks for caring & sharing
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 30th, 2019 17:12
a champions fool
orchidee said:
A fine write if you can do poems this way. I myself prefer at least some extra \'linking\' words, or else I may become too cryptic.
January 22nd, 2018 02:50
orchidee said:
A fine write if you can do poems this way. I myself prefer at least some extra \'linking\' words, or else I may become too cryptic.
January 22nd, 2018 02:50
the love of science
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. It can make it difficult to follow though, without e.g. linking words such as \'and\', \'the\', etc. but it\'s your own style.
September 18th, 2017 01:55
orchidee said:
Good write as a poem. It can make it difficult to follow though, without e.g. linking words such as \'and\', \'the\', etc. but it\'s your own style.
September 18th, 2017 01:55
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