Comments received on poems by lucifer very very very 1st
the lens of the universe
orchidee said:
A good write it is
Write it is a good
Good it is a write
Is a write it good.... and so on!
April 8th, 2023 12:22
orchidee said:
A good write it is
Write it is a good
Good it is a write
Is a write it good.... and so on!
April 8th, 2023 12:22
a old tale
orchidee said:
This is a wise old tale, that it is, a wise old tale it is, a tale wise it surely is!
I\'ve not got the hang of your style to practice it myself yet. lol.
January 18th, 2023 15:40
orchidee said:
This is a wise old tale, that it is, a wise old tale it is, a tale wise it surely is!
I\'ve not got the hang of your style to practice it myself yet. lol.
January 18th, 2023 15:40
a founding grace
orchidee said:
A fine write this
This a fine write
Fine this write is
Is a write that is fine.
My little attempt there. lol.
January 5th, 2023 02:39
orchidee said:
A fine write this
This a fine write
Fine this write is
Is a write that is fine.
My little attempt there. lol.
January 5th, 2023 02:39
knowledge is a impact power
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, all this is probably true if I read it 100 times to sort it all out! lol.
December 3rd, 2022 02:57
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, all this is probably true if I read it 100 times to sort it all out! lol.
December 3rd, 2022 02:57
a player’s skill set
orchidee said:
WHY YOU NOT ADDING CAPITALS?! Oops, excuse the \'shouting\' here of capitals! lol.
October 17th, 2022 01:37
orchidee said:
WHY YOU NOT ADDING CAPITALS?! Oops, excuse the \'shouting\' here of capitals! lol.
October 17th, 2022 01:37
man vs machine
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I liked the abstract sort of style you\'re going for. It\'s quite peculiar and I appreciate that.
April 28th, 2022 13:26
Rocky Lagou said:
Okay I liked the abstract sort of style you\'re going for. It\'s quite peculiar and I appreciate that.
April 28th, 2022 13:26
a lion’s eye of the tiger
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Aside from some repetitive grammar, I love the idea of this poem! Hope to see more in this fashion.
February 23rd, 2022 15:52
ProfessionalPaperDigester said:
Aside from some repetitive grammar, I love the idea of this poem! Hope to see more in this fashion.
February 23rd, 2022 15:52
a lion’s eye of the tiger
orchidee said:
Yep, this is all probably true, though it will take me about 6 hours to unravel it all! lol.
February 23rd, 2022 15:39
orchidee said:
Yep, this is all probably true, though it will take me about 6 hours to unravel it all! lol.
February 23rd, 2022 15:39
a gem unlock a ruby
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, true - I will spend about 6 hours sorting this poem out! lol.
January 23rd, 2022 03:31
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, true - I will spend about 6 hours sorting this poem out! lol.
January 23rd, 2022 03:31
all pointers all wisdom
orchidee said:
I can\'t say this if I\'ve had a gin or three! lol.
December 2nd, 2021 03:24
orchidee said:
I can\'t say this if I\'ve had a gin or three! lol.
December 2nd, 2021 03:24
a character judges a character
orchidee said:
A fine write L, if needing untangling!
That the character of personality or characters on a keyboard?!
If you had brought in caricature, it would be an even more involved poem! Don\'t ask me to attempt such a poem. lol.
July 7th, 2021 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write L, if needing untangling!
That the character of personality or characters on a keyboard?!
If you had brought in caricature, it would be an even more involved poem! Don\'t ask me to attempt such a poem. lol.
July 7th, 2021 02:01
the test of time
dusk arising said:
time tells a vocabulary
time tells a tale of a grand vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand magician
time is a test of time
time is a test of a grand magician
time is a test of a grand vocabulary
vocabulary is a grand tale
vocabulary is a grand tale of a magician
a grand magician is a grand tale of a magician
vocabulary is a magician vocabulary
vocabulary is a grand vocabulary
test of time is a magician grand vocabulary
test of time is a test of a future
test of time is a test of a grand future
test of time is a test of a vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand tale
a grand future is a grand vocabulary
the future is a grand future
the future is the future of a grand vocabulary
the future is the future of a grand tale
March 5th, 2021 15:24
dusk arising said:
time tells a vocabulary
time tells a tale of a grand vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand magician
time is a test of time
time is a test of a grand magician
time is a test of a grand vocabulary
vocabulary is a grand tale
vocabulary is a grand tale of a magician
a grand magician is a grand tale of a magician
vocabulary is a magician vocabulary
vocabulary is a grand vocabulary
test of time is a magician grand vocabulary
test of time is a test of a future
test of time is a test of a grand future
test of time is a test of a vocabulary
the test of time is the test of a grand tale
a grand future is a grand vocabulary
the future is a grand future
the future is the future of a grand vocabulary
the future is the future of a grand tale
March 5th, 2021 15:24
the test of time
orchidee said:
I gotta sort all this out! Have to come back to it, and spend about 3 hours on it, I reckon. (I should like to have the spare time!).
January 30th, 2021 03:04
orchidee said:
I gotta sort all this out! Have to come back to it, and spend about 3 hours on it, I reckon. (I should like to have the spare time!).
January 30th, 2021 03:04
a physical whereabouts
orchidee said:
I might comment in a few hours time, when I\'ve unravelled all this! heehee.
A higgledy piggledy
Piggledy higgledy is this
I don\'t mine higgledy
But give me no piggledy -
Me brain is scrambled now! lol.
January 18th, 2021 03:22
orchidee said:
I might comment in a few hours time, when I\'ve unravelled all this! heehee.
A higgledy piggledy
Piggledy higgledy is this
I don\'t mine higgledy
But give me no piggledy -
Me brain is scrambled now! lol.
January 18th, 2021 03:22
the man power of the 20th century
Doggerel Dave said:
WARNING: Bot installed here.
Hey orch.. Got you in has it? What we have here is, I think, a bot. A primitive bot - one that’s probably been around since the Commodore 64 era. After all, artificial intelligence has moved on, capable of much more sophistication than this, to the point where it could possibly produce work of a matching standard to some on MP...perhaps we shouldn’t go there...
Dave
December 1st, 2020 03:35
Doggerel Dave said:
WARNING: Bot installed here.
Hey orch.. Got you in has it? What we have here is, I think, a bot. A primitive bot - one that’s probably been around since the Commodore 64 era. After all, artificial intelligence has moved on, capable of much more sophistication than this, to the point where it could possibly produce work of a matching standard to some on MP...perhaps we shouldn’t go there...
Dave
December 1st, 2020 03:35
the man power of the 20th century
orchidee said:
I will have to sort all that lot out, when having a little more time!
December 1st, 2020 03:11
orchidee said:
I will have to sort all that lot out, when having a little more time!
December 1st, 2020 03:11
love is a pose of power
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey mate (lvvv1 )
I want to get something sorted here.
Let me just mention a little about me:
I’m no wordsmith, however I can assemble sentences in a way which makes sense to most people. So you could say I’m reasonably good at it. Known as communication, I think I’d get a pass mark anyway. I feel comfortable at MPS because I occasionally get a good response.
However there’s many things through experience I know I’m not good at. These could include painter, sculptor, bus driver, the list goes on. And there are many activities I’d never try – for example, surfboard rider or mountaineer. Those last two because I have no sense of balance and with no manual dexterity or sense of heights I’d have killed myself long ago. I’ve abandoned many attempts at something different over a long life because it made no sense and because I would have just been an object of ridicule if I had continued.
So here, in your case, where are you? Frankly you demonstrate no facility for the English language, you endure much criticism here over that, which cannot be good for your self esteem and yet you remain. Why? I’m hoping you are not an intransigent masochist, but a seeker of satisfaction and fulfillment in life... Give it a go, get out there. Experiment, explore many other activities and leave the environment of MPS , which must be toxic for you, alone.
Take extremely good care of yourself, Dave
November 15th, 2020 04:48
Doggerel Dave said:
Hey mate (lvvv1 )
I want to get something sorted here.
Let me just mention a little about me:
I’m no wordsmith, however I can assemble sentences in a way which makes sense to most people. So you could say I’m reasonably good at it. Known as communication, I think I’d get a pass mark anyway. I feel comfortable at MPS because I occasionally get a good response.
However there’s many things through experience I know I’m not good at. These could include painter, sculptor, bus driver, the list goes on. And there are many activities I’d never try – for example, surfboard rider or mountaineer. Those last two because I have no sense of balance and with no manual dexterity or sense of heights I’d have killed myself long ago. I’ve abandoned many attempts at something different over a long life because it made no sense and because I would have just been an object of ridicule if I had continued.
So here, in your case, where are you? Frankly you demonstrate no facility for the English language, you endure much criticism here over that, which cannot be good for your self esteem and yet you remain. Why? I’m hoping you are not an intransigent masochist, but a seeker of satisfaction and fulfillment in life... Give it a go, get out there. Experiment, explore many other activities and leave the environment of MPS , which must be toxic for you, alone.
Take extremely good care of yourself, Dave
November 15th, 2020 04:48
love is a pose of power
Doggerel Dave said:
Wasted your time and energy, didn\'t you orchidee?
November 14th, 2020 16:53
Doggerel Dave said:
Wasted your time and energy, didn\'t you orchidee?
November 14th, 2020 16:53
love is a pose of power
orchidee said:
That\'s OK, as your unique style - no capitals. We may have to be more formal and grammatical in the world of work, etc. But here there is poetic licence.
Someone named Susan spells their name Su3an, and I\'ve come across Su7an too.
November 10th, 2020 03:06
orchidee said:
That\'s OK, as your unique style - no capitals. We may have to be more formal and grammatical in the world of work, etc. But here there is poetic licence.
Someone named Susan spells their name Su3an, and I\'ve come across Su7an too.
November 10th, 2020 03:06
love is a pose of power
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give it up, DA. I don\'t think you\'ll get through and so the other option is to go round: something I\'m just beginning to learn in relation to several \'poets\' who regularly inflict their splatter here.
- Advice from a novice just learning the ropes.
Dave
November 9th, 2020 20:51
Doggerel Dave said:
I\'d give it up, DA. I don\'t think you\'ll get through and so the other option is to go round: something I\'m just beginning to learn in relation to several \'poets\' who regularly inflict their splatter here.
- Advice from a novice just learning the ropes.
Dave
November 9th, 2020 20:51
love is a pose of power
dusk arising said:
Congratulations, you\'re getting worse. You\'re so vain is the correct spelling and grammar by the way.
November 9th, 2020 18:59
dusk arising said:
Congratulations, you\'re getting worse. You\'re so vain is the correct spelling and grammar by the way.
November 9th, 2020 18:59
a executive order
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s OK as \'poetic licence\', I feel, the non-capitals thing.
So - you don\'t use the \'automatic capitalization at start of each line\' function\' on computers?!
I admit I want to go through the poem and put in capitals. lol.
October 24th, 2020 02:09
orchidee said:
Yes, it\'s OK as \'poetic licence\', I feel, the non-capitals thing.
So - you don\'t use the \'automatic capitalization at start of each line\' function\' on computers?!
I admit I want to go through the poem and put in capitals. lol.
October 24th, 2020 02:09
a executive order
dusk arising said:
I see you are still having problems with basic English grammar.
October 23rd, 2020 13:28
dusk arising said:
I see you are still having problems with basic English grammar.
October 23rd, 2020 13:28
2 eyes of the beast
orchidee said:
Well, I pressed the \'real time\' button. It jumped to 44 seconds and showed the whole poem all at once!
August 8th, 2020 14:54
orchidee said:
Well, I pressed the \'real time\' button. It jumped to 44 seconds and showed the whole poem all at once!
August 8th, 2020 14:54
a hair technology
dusk arising said:
OOOOOH technology, a word from the middle ages. I never, never, never, never ever, never repeat myself.
(I wonder whether he meant to write heir and not hair?.... maybe he is having a bad heir day)
July 24th, 2020 13:34
dusk arising said:
OOOOOH technology, a word from the middle ages. I never, never, never, never ever, never repeat myself.
(I wonder whether he meant to write heir and not hair?.... maybe he is having a bad heir day)
July 24th, 2020 13:34
confession of the mind,body, and soul
orchidee said:
do you never add capitalization? but you use sentences, so the words don\'t all run into one another and get all jumbled up..... you got me started on it now - not pressing the \'caps lock\' button.
September 30th, 2019 03:09
orchidee said:
do you never add capitalization? but you use sentences, so the words don\'t all run into one another and get all jumbled up..... you got me started on it now - not pressing the \'caps lock\' button.
September 30th, 2019 03:09
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