Comments received on poems by Eduanf



Flourish baby, flourish.
myself and me said:

Sprout is a long process and takes a lot of energy, once you see the tip of the seedling, you see the hope of a plant.
Your seed will grow. It takes care and time.
Very good writing.

September 2nd, 2017 18:40

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myself and me said:

The paradise has long gone. Human are the only species on this Earth digging tomb for themselves.

August 16th, 2017 21:40

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Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

August 16th, 2017 13:18

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Louis Gibbs said:

Brilliant line; \"Don\'t they know we all came from the same different source?\" Your poem reflects the sentiment shared by all who witnessed that sad scene, Eduanf. Well done!

August 16th, 2017 09:15

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Nicholas Browning said:

I agree with you. If people could see that we\'re all just humans, and that greed doesn\'t really get you that far, we could do so much more. Thanks for this.

August 16th, 2017 09:07

You keen for another drink?
Nicholas Browning said:

This deserves more views in my opinion.

August 15th, 2017 09:15

Oh please just let it rain
Louis Gibbs said:

Depression seems to be rampant among your age group, Eduanf. A sign of the times I suppose. You expressed it very well in your poem! Welcome to MPS, and I look forward to more of your poetry.

August 14th, 2017 07:08

Oh please just let it rain
Nicholas Browning said:

The last lines hit pretty hard. I\'m 21 myself, and I\'ve been here. Writing is the only way I know how to cope with my insecurities. You\'ve done well, so keep it up. Let it rain.

August 14th, 2017 06:51

Oh please just let it rain
Accidental Poet said:

well written. Man I know this tune. I understand your write so well my friend. Which is how I came to write my latest entry here called \"Stinkin\' Thinkin\'\". I hope you\'ll take a look. I pray you\'ll soon be drenched in happiness and content. Have a great day.

August 14th, 2017 05:22