Comments received on poems by Diane
Inner Thoughts
Accidental Poet said:
I, like BlueDays noticed of your finding nothing to write of, and yet you wrote something worthy of reading. Many times I\'ve been in the same place, but I seem to find something different to write of. A fine effort put forth here willis with great results. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 11:00
Accidental Poet said:
I, like BlueDays noticed of your finding nothing to write of, and yet you wrote something worthy of reading. Many times I\'ve been in the same place, but I seem to find something different to write of. A fine effort put forth here willis with great results. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 11:00
The Lighthouse
BlueDays said:
Simple, light, peaceful, helpful, happy pursuit
September 3rd, 2017 09:50
BlueDays said:
Simple, light, peaceful, helpful, happy pursuit
September 3rd, 2017 09:50
Inner Thoughts
BlueDays said:
I like the irony in this poem, you describe a non day with no feeling or thought yet you have written this, even when you think there is nothing there, it is always inside of you!...a relatable write for me
September 3rd, 2017 09:37
BlueDays said:
I like the irony in this poem, you describe a non day with no feeling or thought yet you have written this, even when you think there is nothing there, it is always inside of you!...a relatable write for me
September 3rd, 2017 09:37
Inner Thoughts
dusk arising said:
Why write when u havent the inspiration. Whats the point? If you\'re inspired you\'ll produce something worthwhile, if not you wont. Why bother. Art on a production line? No thanks.
September 3rd, 2017 08:54
dusk arising said:
Why write when u havent the inspiration. Whats the point? If you\'re inspired you\'ll produce something worthwhile, if not you wont. Why bother. Art on a production line? No thanks.
September 3rd, 2017 08:54
Inner Thoughts
orchidee said:
And now you\'ve done it - written a poem! Good write D. Know what you mean though. Some days, we know, there are things we HAVE to do, like it or not, want to or not, etc!
I know the group thing you mention. I hate certain \'meetings\', mainly if 2 hours long, and I contribute hardly anything to them! Take a nap while someone else drones on. lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:43
orchidee said:
And now you\'ve done it - written a poem! Good write D. Know what you mean though. Some days, we know, there are things we HAVE to do, like it or not, want to or not, etc!
I know the group thing you mention. I hate certain \'meetings\', mainly if 2 hours long, and I contribute hardly anything to them! Take a nap while someone else drones on. lol.
September 3rd, 2017 08:43
The Lighthouse
dusk arising said:
Nice light message contained herein, and we all want such happiness. Good writing. Please comment on some of my work.
September 2nd, 2017 06:02
dusk arising said:
Nice light message contained herein, and we all want such happiness. Good writing. Please comment on some of my work.
September 2nd, 2017 06:02
AS A GIRL
Adam Shirley said:
The older we get, the more cognizant we become, it is a beautiful peace, truly beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 22:01
Adam Shirley said:
The older we get, the more cognizant we become, it is a beautiful peace, truly beautiful!
August 21st, 2017 22:01
AS A GIRL
burning-embers said:
This is quite lovely. The finale is harsh yes and contrasts beautifully. Raises an anger in me for those who abuse the innocence of childhood. Lovely writing and lovely picture too.
August 21st, 2017 21:41
burning-embers said:
This is quite lovely. The finale is harsh yes and contrasts beautifully. Raises an anger in me for those who abuse the innocence of childhood. Lovely writing and lovely picture too.
August 21st, 2017 21:41
AS A GIRL
lasergraph said:
Our perspective always changes from days of youth to the days of adult responsibility. Good work.
August 21st, 2017 21:07
lasergraph said:
Our perspective always changes from days of youth to the days of adult responsibility. Good work.
August 21st, 2017 21:07
AS A GIRL
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more beautiful than the innocence we come in with ... the pure expression of our soul, pre programmed. Well expressed in this fine poem, willsd!
August 21st, 2017 13:32
Louis Gibbs said:
Nothing more beautiful than the innocence we come in with ... the pure expression of our soul, pre programmed. Well expressed in this fine poem, willsd!
August 21st, 2017 13:32
A Dogs Life
Accidental Poet said:
I enjoyed reading this. Life can be challenging at times. Hopefully you\'ll get a day off to breathe.
August 20th, 2017 07:14
Accidental Poet said:
I enjoyed reading this. Life can be challenging at times. Hopefully you\'ll get a day off to breathe.
August 20th, 2017 07:14
A Dogs Life
rrodriguez said:
Clever! I thought this was describing a mom. But really this is my daughter\'s life. Great write. Welcome friend.
August 20th, 2017 07:09
rrodriguez said:
Clever! I thought this was describing a mom. But really this is my daughter\'s life. Great write. Welcome friend.
August 20th, 2017 07:09
