The hole and I
dusk arising said:

Well very pleased you got to feel much better for your writing is severe here. Provokes deep thought about depression. Very nicely written.

August 23rd, 2017 01:39

if the window breaks
burning-embers said:

Beautiful. Such awful damage men have done. Gentle men are here too.
Really saddened me to read your words.

August 21st, 2017 11:52

thistle
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME EMMA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Well written but full of despair and indecisions. We all (M & F) desire to find \"The Love of our Life\" sometimes we marry them (I\'m still single) sometimes we let them go ! In some Countries (where arranged Marriages are the norm) couples don\'t fall in love until after they are married\' Your last line is true but scary \"Some times you don\'t get the love of your life\". Thanks for sharing ~ You will find MPS an empathetic site. Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks ~ Yours BRIAN

August 20th, 2017 16:14