Comments received on poems by florence arla
Steel Limbs
Merissa said:
ooooh, very expressive. Parts of it confuse me, but I got the gist. We think that people pushing us one way, or just always being there is a bad thing, so we want them to let go. However, once they do, we realize the harsh reality of the world without them there, and now we wish they had never let us go. I hope that\'s a good understanding, but who knows. Everyone understands things differently, and it\'s your poem. lol. Either way, loved the emotion represented here.
December 14th, 2018 15:23
Merissa said:
ooooh, very expressive. Parts of it confuse me, but I got the gist. We think that people pushing us one way, or just always being there is a bad thing, so we want them to let go. However, once they do, we realize the harsh reality of the world without them there, and now we wish they had never let us go. I hope that\'s a good understanding, but who knows. Everyone understands things differently, and it\'s your poem. lol. Either way, loved the emotion represented here.
December 14th, 2018 15:23
Unconventional Beauty
Merissa said:
I wish someone would describe me like that. lol. No, but what you say is true. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, and therefore, no one can say you aren\'t beautiful. Everyone is unique, and special in their own way. I really like this. :-)
December 14th, 2018 15:18
Merissa said:
I wish someone would describe me like that. lol. No, but what you say is true. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder, and therefore, no one can say you aren\'t beautiful. Everyone is unique, and special in their own way. I really like this. :-)
December 14th, 2018 15:18
Letter to no one who cares. Fuck it
Merissa said:
Loved it. Very passionate. I can see a lot of pain that bounces out of this letter. I\'ve never experienced this kind of situation. I\'ve never been with anyone, but I can see why people warn everyone else about the struggles of love.
December 14th, 2018 15:08
Merissa said:
Loved it. Very passionate. I can see a lot of pain that bounces out of this letter. I\'ve never experienced this kind of situation. I\'ve never been with anyone, but I can see why people warn everyone else about the struggles of love.
December 14th, 2018 15:08
Letter to no one who cares. Fuck it
orchidee said:
Oohh should mark this as for 18+ I think.
April 29th, 2018 01:51
orchidee said:
Oohh should mark this as for 18+ I think.
April 29th, 2018 01:51
Unconventional Beauty
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FLORENCE ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem with us. Thanks for reminding us that we are all beautiful in our own way ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 17:23
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FLORENCE ~ Thanks for sharing your first poem with us. Thanks for reminding us that we are all beautiful in our own way ~ AMEN ~ Yours BRIAN
August 22nd, 2017 17:23
Unconventional Beauty
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, florence!
I do like your beautifully written poem. It is all good, but I just love \'the crease of her eye where sunny laughter reigns\'!
August 22nd, 2017 11:54
FredPeyer said:
Welcome to MPS, florence!
I do like your beautifully written poem. It is all good, but I just love \'the crease of her eye where sunny laughter reigns\'!
August 22nd, 2017 11:54
