Comments received on poems by CaraMia
I Want The Old Him
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the old him does change but it could be for the better. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 00:56
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, the old him does change but it could be for the better. Welcome to MPS.
August 25th, 2017 00:56
I Want The Old Him
dusk arising said:
I love your writing but it has left me a little confused and sad for you.
August 24th, 2017 21:47
dusk arising said:
I love your writing but it has left me a little confused and sad for you.
August 24th, 2017 21:47
I Want The Old Him
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CARA WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first and very descriptive Poem. I love the loving playful reminiscences of your opening lines. Some of us have experienced true love just like that ! I speak as a Man and the Love of Ladies I have experienced over the last 16 years (I\'m 33 !). Then we come to line 12 \"This is the Man I wish for ~ that is the Man I pray for. Your mood changes from the day by day (and night by night) enjoyment of your Man ~ To ~ wanting him to return ~ THE SAME OLD MAN ~ and all the pain of waiting to be over ! The first 11 lines made me Happy for You ~ The last 8 made me sad. I know from experience it Happens ~ GF\'s of mine have gone away to Study & Work etc ~ and sometimes sadly ~ THEY NEVER COME BACK ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 24th, 2017 19:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
CARA WELCOME TO MPS ~ Thanks for your first and very descriptive Poem. I love the loving playful reminiscences of your opening lines. Some of us have experienced true love just like that ! I speak as a Man and the Love of Ladies I have experienced over the last 16 years (I\'m 33 !). Then we come to line 12 \"This is the Man I wish for ~ that is the Man I pray for. Your mood changes from the day by day (and night by night) enjoyment of your Man ~ To ~ wanting him to return ~ THE SAME OLD MAN ~ and all the pain of waiting to be over ! The first 11 lines made me Happy for You ~ The last 8 made me sad. I know from experience it Happens ~ GF\'s of mine have gone away to Study & Work etc ~ and sometimes sadly ~ THEY NEVER COME BACK ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
August 24th, 2017 19:20