Comments received on poems by BlueDays
Shingebiss and the North Wind
Accidental Poet said:
I enjoyed it too. Native American Indian culture is very interesting and you\'ve penned a honorable tribute to that culture. Thank you for sharing BlueDays. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 21:25
Accidental Poet said:
I enjoyed it too. Native American Indian culture is very interesting and you\'ve penned a honorable tribute to that culture. Thank you for sharing BlueDays. ; )
September 3rd, 2017 21:25
Shingebiss and the North Wind
WL Schuett said:
Nicely told , the legend lives ... I did enjoy it ...a very cool poem
September 3rd, 2017 18:49
WL Schuett said:
Nicely told , the legend lives ... I did enjoy it ...a very cool poem
September 3rd, 2017 18:49
Sex Starved
TN96 said:
Sure thing BlueDays, although I guessed it was mythology related, It didn\'t click for me at first that Eros was the Greek god of sexual attraction. So I sort of read it as if he were a tyrannical, omnipotent god getting off on messing with people\'s lives. Which I guess is somewhat true in the poem, but it took me a few reads to realise what it really meant ;) haha
September 3rd, 2017 08:11
TN96 said:
Sure thing BlueDays, although I guessed it was mythology related, It didn\'t click for me at first that Eros was the Greek god of sexual attraction. So I sort of read it as if he were a tyrannical, omnipotent god getting off on messing with people\'s lives. Which I guess is somewhat true in the poem, but it took me a few reads to realise what it really meant ;) haha
September 3rd, 2017 08:11
Sex Starved
dusk arising said:
Eros the black hearted beast ....thats a first! Don\'t get too hungry for love or you might begin to be frightenng. Anyway, a great piece of writing! Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 08:00
dusk arising said:
Eros the black hearted beast ....thats a first! Don\'t get too hungry for love or you might begin to be frightenng. Anyway, a great piece of writing! Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 08:00
Sex Starved
BlueDays said:
I\'m really chuffed with these comments, thank you everyone I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
September 3rd, 2017 05:12
BlueDays said:
I\'m really chuffed with these comments, thank you everyone I\'m glad you enjoyed it.
September 3rd, 2017 05:12
Sex Starved
malubotelho said:
Interesting writing. Well done. Never read anything similar before.
September 2nd, 2017 20:41
malubotelho said:
Interesting writing. Well done. Never read anything similar before.
September 2nd, 2017 20:41
Black
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, BlueDays. It is in our blackest moments that we see the light, even if it is only a flicker at first!
September 2nd, 2017 19:28
FredPeyer said:
Beautifully written, BlueDays. It is in our blackest moments that we see the light, even if it is only a flicker at first!
September 2nd, 2017 19:28
Blood on the bed
FredPeyer said:
I was filled with sadness after reading your excellent poem, BlueDays. I do hope that writing it out did help maybe a tiny little bit, but also know that the pain, while diminished, will not go away. You say your protests were shushed, you had no choice, no fight, and no voice, so it happened against your will. That is called \'rape\'.
September 2nd, 2017 19:25
FredPeyer said:
I was filled with sadness after reading your excellent poem, BlueDays. I do hope that writing it out did help maybe a tiny little bit, but also know that the pain, while diminished, will not go away. You say your protests were shushed, you had no choice, no fight, and no voice, so it happened against your will. That is called \'rape\'.
September 2nd, 2017 19:25
Sex Starved
FredPeyer said:
Very nice write, BlueDays! Unusual and imaginative angle, I do like it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:12
FredPeyer said:
Very nice write, BlueDays! Unusual and imaginative angle, I do like it!
September 2nd, 2017 19:12
Sex Starved
TN96 said:
Haha, I love this! Straight to the point, yet each time I read it I see it from a different angle
September 2nd, 2017 18:25
TN96 said:
Haha, I love this! Straight to the point, yet each time I read it I see it from a different angle
September 2nd, 2017 18:25
Sex Starved
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem , I feel for you, hope he shoots an arrow for you soon ...
September 2nd, 2017 16:35
WL Schuett said:
Cool poem , I feel for you, hope he shoots an arrow for you soon ...
September 2nd, 2017 16:35
Blood on the bed
Accidental Poet said:
I can see that someone has betrayed you, and you so purposely put them in their place. Excellent write. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 08:42
Accidental Poet said:
I can see that someone has betrayed you, and you so purposely put them in their place. Excellent write. ; )
September 2nd, 2017 08:42
Blood on the bed
WL Schuett said:
Good to write out the pain , good poem but sad
September 1st, 2017 09:01
WL Schuett said:
Good to write out the pain , good poem but sad
September 1st, 2017 09:01
Blood on the bed
TN96 said:
Those that thrive from the pain of others,
May burn in the knowledge of the disappointment of their mothers.
September 1st, 2017 08:00
TN96 said:
Those that thrive from the pain of others,
May burn in the knowledge of the disappointment of their mothers.
September 1st, 2017 08:00
Black
myself and me said:
Only after experiencing black, you will appreciate those bright days.
Well expressed.
August 31st, 2017 20:18
myself and me said:
Only after experiencing black, you will appreciate those bright days.
Well expressed.
August 31st, 2017 20:18
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