Blonde Hair
FredPeyer said:

I do like the way you structured this poem with the repetition of \'his blond hair\'. Would you have loved him if he would have been black-haired?

September 4th, 2017 21:02

Blonde Hair
Christina K said:

this is really neat - i love the repetition involving his blonde hair

September 4th, 2017 20:36

Crash
FredPeyer said:

Your well written poem really drew me in. I felt as if I was in that car, and you know what? I wouldn\'t let go of that handle either! But eventually we must. Let go, I mean.

September 4th, 2017 03:44

Sunglasses
FredPeyer said:

Ruby, your well written poem makes a valid point: After the rain comes the sun, after night it is day. No matter how bad you feel one moment, there will be another moment where you feel great!

September 2nd, 2017 21:30

Sunglasses
Big poet said:

i like it, thanks for sharing :)

September 2nd, 2017 17:44