Comments received on poems by ruby.e



Set Free
FredPeyer said:

Ruby, this poem is so tender, written from the heart, full of love, regret, and hope. Wonderful writing. I do hope that writing this will help you overcome this really hard time in your life.

September 19th, 2017 03:10

Set Free
myself and me said:

Feel that hollowness inside you and the desire for parents\' love. You are so brave and gone so far. One day, you will find your peace and be free.
Wonderful writing.

September 18th, 2017 19:43

Poison Ivy
myself and me said:

Agree with FredPeyer. Go to see a doctor.

September 12th, 2017 20:19

Poison Ivy
FredPeyer said:

Ruby, go see a doctor! How do you know it is Poison Ivy? Could be something else!

September 12th, 2017 20:12

Storm
FredPeyer said:

These storms show us that no matter how important we think we are, we don\'t matter! Nature shows us who is the boss! All we can do is cower, pray, and hope for the best.

September 11th, 2017 19:52

Storm
myself and me said:

It is going to take a long time to recover from such a severe storm. Wish them safe.
Well written.

September 11th, 2017 18:43

Storm
LAWLESS said:

Very appropriate and heart wrenching.
Please change the word on to one and then I will delete this message. Damn spell check!!

September 11th, 2017 16:50

Santa Claus
FredPeyer said:

You should be proud of this one, ruby! It is a great poem!

September 11th, 2017 04:13

Saddest Love Triangle
dusk arising said:

I recently found myself in one of these horrendous situations..... really got my fingers burned.... now there are three ppl who cannot speak to one another without animosity. You dont see it coming..... before you know it you\'ve done the wrong thing and the whole world caves in on you. Horrible. Somebody says theres always a way... that would be true if all parties were equally wise - dream on! Rejected potential partners dont give 2nd chances. Nicely written.

September 10th, 2017 16:11

Saddest Love Triangle
F.G. Franklin said:

I enjoyed the read. But I have to say, there is always a choice and where there is love there is always a way because love makes a way. You are right that we can\'t go back but we do have the power to alter our future.

September 10th, 2017 12:14

Saddest Love Triangle
myself and me said:

No matter how you choose, you will always feel you choose the wrong one, since there is no one on the earth is perfect, has all the characters meet your needs. This is life.

September 10th, 2017 11:54

Our Bond
dusk arising said:

Yes, just like Santita commented, I assumed he was going to be your man. Nice twist.
Come to our part of Europe, we dont eat or kidnap americans here and the language is almost the same.

September 10th, 2017 06:36

Our Bond
myself and me said:

Enjoy your trip. happy to see you so close to your brother.
Nice poem

September 9th, 2017 18:30

Our Bond
LAWLESS said:

I did enjoy this very much. So he is your brother? Or a soul brother?

September 9th, 2017 17:50

Our Bond
Santita said:

Great piece, Ruby. And I found the ending to be a surprise, because I assumed \"he\" was your lover. Nicely done!

September 9th, 2017 16:06

Santa Claus
Thoff1 said:

Santa is only fake if you believe that

September 8th, 2017 23:19

Santa Claus
myself and me said:

Real or not, every year he comes out.
A nice rhyme poem.

September 8th, 2017 21:33

Santa Claus
dusk arising said:

Well my faith in that one and his son died when we found out my daugher was severely mentally handicapped. I looked further and found lots lots more. TBH i cat understand why christian churches still teach things which their own theologists know to be wrong and inaccurate. Rhyme if you want to. Some people like it simple.

September 8th, 2017 19:50

Santa Claus
dusk arising said:

Santa is a great idea and a wonderful myth around which theres so much fun to be had at christmas time. Nice writing with a great return. Dont be worried about making everything rhyme always...plenty of good stuff doesn\'t rhyme.. It\'s the choice of words and phrasing in some poetry make it work.

September 8th, 2017 16:55

Writer\'s Block
dusk arising said:

Just write wot u feel, if it doesnt work out stick it into an incomplete ideas box...good to look at another day for inspiration... or dont write at all.... heaven forbid writing becomes a chore rater than a pleasure. Rhyme.... yeah if u want to...all to often i dont bother with rhyme.... poets know how to read a piece which doesn\'t rhyme.
Writing on MPS gives you total freedom to write any style, no style, or nothing at all.... or just make weird comment like this on other ppl\'s work...great here isn\'t it.

September 8th, 2017 15:39

Writer\'s Block
LAWLESS said:

Yep

September 7th, 2017 21:31

Writer\'s Block
BlueDays said:

Yes I agree with M&M, have a break and don\'t push. I find a lot of inspiration comes from reading others work

September 7th, 2017 17:38

Writer\'s Block
myself and me said:

For a time like this, sit back and enjoy the free time, reading poem on MPS.

September 7th, 2017 16:32

Writer\'s Block
FredPeyer said:

Just a day at the office for a writer!
Love it!

September 7th, 2017 16:31

Adult Relationship
Santita said:

This is very well expressed. I enjoy the honesty of your piece. No one wants a one-sided relationship, good on you.

September 7th, 2017 14:59

Adult Relationship
myself and me said:

\"I’m done being a kid.\"
One day, you will reverse this statement.
Nice writing.

September 6th, 2017 20:38

Adult Relationship
FredPeyer said:

I do like the way you write, ruby, straight forward and honest.
And your poem touches at an age-old truth. When we are young, we want to be older, then, when we are old we want to be younger!
Every age has its beauty and its challenges.

September 6th, 2017 19:46

Adult Relationship
LAWLESS said:

Well expressed and well written. I\'ve been an adult for 32 years now, it gets a lot easier to be grown up. 30 years old was my crossroad.

September 6th, 2017 19:39

Adult Relationship
dusk arising said:

Nice writing Ruby. I hope the dilemma of your poems contents is a thing of the past. Beware of certain lecherous poets on here LOL. Please comment on my stuff.

September 6th, 2017 18:56

Adult Relationship
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Thanks RUBY (lovely name !) Great free verse poem ~ full of go and flow ~ like you wanted to get this relationship out of your mind ! My Lady friends tel me there are Men like that no LIBIDO and often nothing sensuous to offer a Lady ! OMG I remember Middle School and Girls scared us ! BUT after I was 16 it all changed ~ and for the last 18 years I have always tried to make my Ladies smile ! I\'m \"normal\" Ruby so there are plenty of Guys out there just like me who know how to treasure and pleasure a Lady ~ like you who wants ~ An Adult Relationship ~ Trust you find a REAL MAN SOON ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Pleae check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

September 6th, 2017 18:11

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