Comments received on poems by maggie
A Lovers Light
dusk arising said:
Who\'s paying the electric bill? Nice love poem.
September 10th, 2017 11:31
dusk arising said:
Who\'s paying the electric bill? Nice love poem.
September 10th, 2017 11:31
Day Break
myself and me said:
You are a strong-minded person. Good for you.
Nice writing.
September 4th, 2017 20:01
myself and me said:
You are a strong-minded person. Good for you.
Nice writing.
September 4th, 2017 20:01
Day Break
dusk arising said:
Strong writing with a strong purpose in mind. Always good to see something positive being expressed, we poets can be such a depressing lot sometimes. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
September 4th, 2017 10:25
dusk arising said:
Strong writing with a strong purpose in mind. Always good to see something positive being expressed, we poets can be such a depressing lot sometimes. Looking forward to seeing more from you.
September 4th, 2017 10:25
Day Break
Seek said:
A rebirth is in progress. With your positive outlook, your life already is in safe hands.
September 4th, 2017 08:02
Seek said:
A rebirth is in progress. With your positive outlook, your life already is in safe hands.
September 4th, 2017 08:02
O My ....
ron parrish aka wordman said:
we can all relate to this,great job
September 3rd, 2017 20:56
ron parrish aka wordman said:
we can all relate to this,great job
September 3rd, 2017 20:56
O My ....
dusk arising said:
The last line is worrying me. It reads \'well shall have met\' should that be \'we\'? Would then make sense as a soulmates piece encompassing prior lifes etc. Nicely written though, even if i have got a wrong handle on this. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 14:56
dusk arising said:
The last line is worrying me. It reads \'well shall have met\' should that be \'we\'? Would then make sense as a soulmates piece encompassing prior lifes etc. Nicely written though, even if i have got a wrong handle on this. Please comment on my stuff.
September 3rd, 2017 14:56
O My ....
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MAGGIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Excellent ~ compact an yet bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We can empathise because we know _ from experience ~ That parting is such Sweet Sorrow ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2017 10:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME MAGGIE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Excellent ~ compact an yet bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm ! We can empathise because we know _ from experience ~ That parting is such Sweet Sorrow ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 3rd, 2017 10:57
