Comments received on poems by LM1005
EMINEM TRIBUTE (explicit warning)
LM1005 said:
Thanks man! I appreciate it. I checked out some of your writing as well and appreciated your skill-set. If you would like to have a write off sometime I would love to do so!
September 9th, 2017 12:54
LM1005 said:
Thanks man! I appreciate it. I checked out some of your writing as well and appreciated your skill-set. If you would like to have a write off sometime I would love to do so!
September 9th, 2017 12:54
EMINEM TRIBUTE (explicit warning)
poetboy123 said:
I don\'t listen to much Eminem except for his song, Lose Yourself (one of my favorites), good write!
September 9th, 2017 11:59
poetboy123 said:
I don\'t listen to much Eminem except for his song, Lose Yourself (one of my favorites), good write!
September 9th, 2017 11:59
Gibberish (must read!)
HeartfullyFallen said:
Yknow what? I love this, honestly, is great! Its deffenitly funny, but I think it also has a accidental deeper meaning and I love that. You did a great job at your ramble and I hope to read more sometime, keep it up
September 8th, 2017 19:53
HeartfullyFallen said:
Yknow what? I love this, honestly, is great! Its deffenitly funny, but I think it also has a accidental deeper meaning and I love that. You did a great job at your ramble and I hope to read more sometime, keep it up
September 8th, 2017 19:53
Homeless, Hopeless
dusk arising said:
There are many types of people homeless and for many reasons. Although we may see them as a dirty dishevvelled and smelly entity there are usually very good reasons why they are opted out of society - reasons which would try any one of us. They do deserve some respect, life for them is not easy. I had a brief period of homelessness and had the opportunity to begin to know some of these characters. Your writing is good, inquisative. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 20:21
dusk arising said:
There are many types of people homeless and for many reasons. Although we may see them as a dirty dishevvelled and smelly entity there are usually very good reasons why they are opted out of society - reasons which would try any one of us. They do deserve some respect, life for them is not easy. I had a brief period of homelessness and had the opportunity to begin to know some of these characters. Your writing is good, inquisative. Please comment on my stuff.
September 6th, 2017 20:21
Bury Me
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! First of all I am sorry for your loss and your pain. But you have penned a beautiful rhyming poem. I lost my mom not that long ago which I will be posting about maybe today. The pain never goes away but the sting lessens. You really did a great job on this and I can\'t wait to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing!
September 5th, 2017 23:01
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! First of all I am sorry for your loss and your pain. But you have penned a beautiful rhyming poem. I lost my mom not that long ago which I will be posting about maybe today. The pain never goes away but the sting lessens. You really did a great job on this and I can\'t wait to read more of your work! Thanks for sharing!
September 5th, 2017 23:01
Bury Me
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ It is an elegant tribute to the GRAVE ! Excellent structure ~ balanced Quatrains and rhyming couplets (my favorite !) I don\'t believe in cremation so I guess I\'ll end up in a GRAVE in about 60 years time ! I have lost a BROTHER (16) so i can empathise with your loss. Stephen was killed in a car accident 13 years ago and you NEVER fully recover ! However I do believe We will meet again in Heaven ~ so for me the GRAVE will only be transient ! Thanks for caring & sharing BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2017 11:14
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Welcome FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ It is an elegant tribute to the GRAVE ! Excellent structure ~ balanced Quatrains and rhyming couplets (my favorite !) I don\'t believe in cremation so I guess I\'ll end up in a GRAVE in about 60 years time ! I have lost a BROTHER (16) so i can empathise with your loss. Stephen was killed in a car accident 13 years ago and you NEVER fully recover ! However I do believe We will meet again in Heaven ~ so for me the GRAVE will only be transient ! Thanks for caring & sharing BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
September 5th, 2017 11:14
