Comments received on poems by myleealollar1945

HeartfullyFallen said:

I\'m Impressed, slightly worried about a Maybe hidden meaning in this but Impressed. I like it

September 8th, 2017 19:56

myself and me said:

Start from A smile, end with A smile. A love story replay by itself forward, reward.
Love, you could never understand.
Very beautiful writing. Welcome to this site.

September 6th, 2017 19:50

FredPeyer said:

A very beautiful first poem here, m.
Well written, well crafted. I do like it a lot. And I agree with the last line. We all should give away a lot more smiles!

September 6th, 2017 16:12


WELCOME MYLEE ~Thanks for a very elegant and meaningful First Poem. The ups and downs and ins and outs of LOVE is something we can all emphasise with ! The phrase \"We both wonder what could have been\" is alas the epithet to many a promising love affair that could have gone anywhere but actually went NOWHERE. Being a Single Man (in the 30 ~ 35- zone) I always say \"Better to have loved and lost than never to have LOVED at all\" However I feel that attitude is easier for Men Than Ladies. Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

September 6th, 2017 11:17

Sunflowers Bloom said:

Really really enjoyed this piece

September 6th, 2017 09:27

Louis Gibbs said:

I like the affect of the two-word intros to each phrase ... a very effective technique and a fine write! Welcome to MPS. I look forward to more from you, \'my\'.

September 6th, 2017 09:19