Comments received on poems by Allysnewworld



Closing in
dusk arising said:

Cor! You\'re gonna just love it when happiness arrives again.

January 31st, 2019 17:56

Poets question everything but their own art
sylviasearcher said:

And what is a poet and would I know one if I saw it?

Perhaps it is just a social constructionist but damn I like to spill it all fearlessly on the page!

Got me thinking!

January 31st, 2019 15:17

my long hiatus
FredPeyer said:

Allys, we all want to take an out once in a while, live in a reality where there are no problems, no mortgages, no sadness. But unfortunately, reality usually catches up. I do like the way you wrote this. But now I guess it is time to face the music!

November 11th, 2017 19:19

Too many miles
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant! Took me right back to my days of walking the streets, I could say so much to this, but from my younger self I\'d say just keep up that write!
Thank you for sharing.

September 14th, 2017 11:35

Too many miles
Liberty_Shadows said:

This is truly an amazing poem! It\'s deep, and relatable. i love it!


September 14th, 2017 11:28

This isn\'t a poem, it\'s poetry
Michael Edwards said:

Not sure if intended but there was something warming about the read - and a good read at that.

September 10th, 2017 05:43

The bustling streets of emptiness
Tony36 said:

Great write

September 8th, 2017 10:31

The bustling streets of emptiness
lasergraph said:

I loved the write. It seemed lonely but very well expressed.

September 8th, 2017 10:29