Comments received on poems by III.XVI

Nonpoetry I- It\'s Just a phase.
seeker123 said:

I can relate to you through your words.
\'She feels alone now, more alone than she ever was. She stares at walls, those little voices in her head are the only thing she has.\'

September 9th, 2017 11:44

Nonpoetry I- It\'s Just a phase.
poetboy5454 said:

I understand that from a stranger these words may seem repetitive, but there are times where you have to make your own light to brighten your day, and it is much harder than it sounds. This was very well expressed and a brilliant read because it comes from the heart.

September 9th, 2017 10:44

Nicholas Browning said:

Wonderland is a fantastic place.

September 7th, 2017 21:57


WELCOME FRIEND ~ THANKS FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! You will enjoy MPS it is an empathetic site ! being Poets most of us are slightly MAD and Poetry is very Cathartic. When our end does come we all expect to end up in Paradise but there are alternative and we don;t know where we\'re going ~ until we get there ! Much food for thought in this SEXTET Yours BRIAN (UK)

September 7th, 2017 17:56