Comments received on poems by arazimus
Let’s call it Timmy
2781 said:
On that day you will realise that I am in the Father, and you are in me, and I am in you.
November 15th, 2023 01:11
2781 said:
On that day you will realise that I am in the Father, and you are in me, and I am in you.
November 15th, 2023 01:11
Clean
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors will open and in them you will find many wonders that will lead you to write words like this.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors will open and in them you will find many wonders that will lead you to write words like this.
Andy
December 19th, 2020 02:26
That’s life
Doggerel Dave said:
Needs to be chiseled in stone many times for many places.
Can I order one for my front door (a reminder to me on my way out)?
Regards Dave
November 20th, 2020 17:31
Doggerel Dave said:
Needs to be chiseled in stone many times for many places.
Can I order one for my front door (a reminder to me on my way out)?
Regards Dave
November 20th, 2020 17:31
That’s life
L. B. Mek said:
Hate, is ever frail - like all fuel, it burns boldly wild and is seemingly impossible to tame, and yet - a mere trickle of unexpected kindness, or a featherweight whisper of sound guidance is all that\'s needed to douse its greed for the reactionary dramatics - poisoning our lives...
you have penned a uniquely insightful write, like the calm in your tone as well
November 20th, 2020 04:38
L. B. Mek said:
Hate, is ever frail - like all fuel, it burns boldly wild and is seemingly impossible to tame, and yet - a mere trickle of unexpected kindness, or a featherweight whisper of sound guidance is all that\'s needed to douse its greed for the reactionary dramatics - poisoning our lives...
you have penned a uniquely insightful write, like the calm in your tone as well
November 20th, 2020 04:38
That’s life
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Once one realises it has taken a hold, it is time to get rid of it for it is a negative force and if not rejected it will lead us onto actions which are out of character probably leading to regret.
I dont think i have seen this subject dealt with in poetry before and i really like the way you ahve addressed it here.
This one goes into my favourites without hesitation. Thank you.
November 19th, 2020 17:06
dusk arising said:
Oh so true. Once one realises it has taken a hold, it is time to get rid of it for it is a negative force and if not rejected it will lead us onto actions which are out of character probably leading to regret.
I dont think i have seen this subject dealt with in poetry before and i really like the way you ahve addressed it here.
This one goes into my favourites without hesitation. Thank you.
November 19th, 2020 17:06
Where the hell am i
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that darkness will turn into light and all will be well with our world.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
One day that darkness will turn into light and all will be well with our world.
Andy
October 11th, 2020 00:26
I hate titles
orchidee said:
Yes, titles and honours of Sir, Lord, etc. The arrogance of some saying \'Do you know who I am?\' We may reply: \'Nope, I don\'t know who you are; so you can\'t be anyone of any importance then!\'
October 9th, 2020 01:46
orchidee said:
Yes, titles and honours of Sir, Lord, etc. The arrogance of some saying \'Do you know who I am?\' We may reply: \'Nope, I don\'t know who you are; so you can\'t be anyone of any importance then!\'
October 9th, 2020 01:46
I hate titles
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each who we are and have no need to change that.
Andy
October 9th, 2020 00:54
Goldfinch60 said:
We are each who we are and have no need to change that.
Andy
October 9th, 2020 00:54
Missing
dusk arising said:
There is so much condensed into this piece. It is so well composed and a pleasure to read and re read.
A must for my favourites today.
July 3rd, 2020 08:03
dusk arising said:
There is so much condensed into this piece. It is so well composed and a pleasure to read and re read.
A must for my favourites today.
July 3rd, 2020 08:03
Absurd beauty
kevin browne said:
Perfect;y placed into the belief that you understand how happy you are to have been born. Never believe anything different for your children love and need you constantly.
January 22nd, 2019 23:59
kevin browne said:
Perfect;y placed into the belief that you understand how happy you are to have been born. Never believe anything different for your children love and need you constantly.
January 22nd, 2019 23:59
12:17 2019
Neville said:
ah\' dont ya just love them early morning routines.... enjoyed by me cheers.. N
January 1st, 2019 10:29
Neville said:
ah\' dont ya just love them early morning routines.... enjoyed by me cheers.. N
January 1st, 2019 10:29
Down
dusk arising said:
Or to put it another way... you are a born survivor.
Live long and prosper.... start tomorrow... it\'s the first day of the rest of your life.
December 8th, 2018 13:03
dusk arising said:
Or to put it another way... you are a born survivor.
Live long and prosper.... start tomorrow... it\'s the first day of the rest of your life.
December 8th, 2018 13:03
9:20
Neville said:
what a nice little series of personal recollections, you have kindly left as a gift for us all here to enjoy.. tinged with sadness or regret maybe but so obviously at one time truly meant, or maybe even still.. Neville
December 6th, 2018 12:14
Neville said:
what a nice little series of personal recollections, you have kindly left as a gift for us all here to enjoy.. tinged with sadness or regret maybe but so obviously at one time truly meant, or maybe even still.. Neville
December 6th, 2018 12:14
Down
marlenawood said:
To find inner peace is the key to happiness within the soul beautiful write love
March 16th, 2018 08:04
marlenawood said:
To find inner peace is the key to happiness within the soul beautiful write love
March 16th, 2018 08:04
Down
Lorna said:
We shouldn\'t be saved from our dreams - even if they kill us...... which they often do........
March 16th, 2018 07:15
Lorna said:
We shouldn\'t be saved from our dreams - even if they kill us...... which they often do........
March 16th, 2018 07:15
One
dusk arising said:
Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to mind the wonder of destiny.... is it all worked out beforehand and we just innocently float along upon our destined route? Look what youve started! Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 11:02
dusk arising said:
Aaaah that god-spun draft wafting through our lifes. Your words bring to mind the wonder of destiny.... is it all worked out beforehand and we just innocently float along upon our destined route? Look what youve started! Please comment on my stuff.
September 16th, 2017 11:02
One
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Beautiful! It is so deep yet so delicate, keep up the work!
CR x
September 16th, 2017 07:49
Chloe Rachel Flisher said:
Beautiful! It is so deep yet so delicate, keep up the work!
CR x
September 16th, 2017 07:49
One
arazimus said:
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, it means the world to me and yes that\'s my wife and I, 25 years strong now
September 16th, 2017 07:21
arazimus said:
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, it means the world to me and yes that\'s my wife and I, 25 years strong now
September 16th, 2017 07:21
One
Noah said:
What a lovely depiction of two souls making their own way, only to find each other one day. I hope that\'s right at least lol
September 16th, 2017 06:59
Noah said:
What a lovely depiction of two souls making their own way, only to find each other one day. I hope that\'s right at least lol
September 16th, 2017 06:59
Heading out
arazimus said:
Thank you very much dusk that means so much to me and after reading your great writes I am humbled,thanks again!
September 16th, 2017 03:00
arazimus said:
Thank you very much dusk that means so much to me and after reading your great writes I am humbled,thanks again!
September 16th, 2017 03:00
Heading out
dusk arising said:
Isolation is a remedy but not the cure. Break out, or rather break back into the real world.
I enjoyed the way youve crafted this.
September 15th, 2017 22:00
dusk arising said:
Isolation is a remedy but not the cure. Break out, or rather break back into the real world.
I enjoyed the way youve crafted this.
September 15th, 2017 22:00
