Comments received on poems by Cat



Why are you here?
nasim sataitis said:

I love your poem keep up with the good work

November 18th, 2019 19:36

The Light
Goldfinch60 said:

That light is there Cat, and it seems you have found it in your rainbow. Good write.

November 17th, 2019 02:18

Happiness
Michael Edwards said:

Just a suggestion for the last stanza:

Happiness is new to me
Feelings aren’t so hard now
Since we’ve been together
Happy 6 months to my love


November 15th, 2019 10:09

Happiness
Michael Edwards said:

I do admire you for asking for suggestions for what is already a well written piece of poetry . I\'ll take a look again later to see if I can suggest anything but okay as it is.

November 15th, 2019 06:28

Happiness
orchidee said:

Nope, I can\'t improve on that ! lol. But seriously, it\'s a good write. No matter if you\'re not into poetic forms, or \'professional\' poetry. I don\'t think we\'re into that on here.
*Swoons in amazement at the poem!* heehee.

November 15th, 2019 04:51

Happiness
Cat said:

Also the last stanza is missing a line but I just have no idea what to say

November 15th, 2019 04:48

A Scarlet Ocean
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write. We care.

November 14th, 2019 01:23