Comments received on poems by MereGolden



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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

Welcome GOLDEN ~ Thanks for your First Poem full of tension ! I could break the CHAIN for you Sweetheart and then you would be free to fly wherever you heart takes you ! Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ thanks B

September 28th, 2017 06:11

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Christina8 said:

Very nice first poem! Welcome to MPS! I love the last two lines, very good! I hope you stay and write more, as you obviously write very well. Great job!

September 27th, 2017 21:15

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Gary Edward Geraci said:

Keep the wings and fix your gaze on the light. Nice expression. I\'ll mention NAMI for your readers who are standing on the cliff of genuine hopelessness.

September 27th, 2017 21:09