Comments received on poems by zeta
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZETA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It has excellent STRUCTURE ~ five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent rhyme pattern abab cdcd etc. The SUBJECT starts sadly with REJECTION by ends with RESOLVE ~ to be the best you can be ! The BIBLE says we should love our NEIGHBOUR as OURSELVES. If you have NO SELF ESTEEM ~ we can\'t hep anybody ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 30th, 2017 16:03
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME ZETA ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It has excellent STRUCTURE ~ five balanced QUATRAINS and a consistent rhyme pattern abab cdcd etc. The SUBJECT starts sadly with REJECTION by ends with RESOLVE ~ to be the best you can be ! The BIBLE says we should love our NEIGHBOUR as OURSELVES. If you have NO SELF ESTEEM ~ we can\'t hep anybody ! Yours BRIAN (UK)
September 30th, 2017 16:03
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WL Schuett said:
Hi Zeta , a nice poem to start off with . Nicely conceived with a nice easy rhythm and good rhymes , hope to see more .
September 30th, 2017 15:34
WL Schuett said:
Hi Zeta , a nice poem to start off with . Nicely conceived with a nice easy rhythm and good rhymes , hope to see more .
September 30th, 2017 15:34
