Comments received on poems by chenise_jade

What\'s underneath

WELCOME CHENISE ~ thanks for your first poem ! I Like the Structure ~ Three rhyming couplets ~ my favorite form of verse. The Subject makes one pause for thought ! ECCEDENTESTIAST One who wears a False Smile to hide their PAIN. We all do that from time to time so we are empathetic to what you say \" No need for a False Smile on MPS we accept you jut a you are ~ next Poem please. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Pleas check my Poem ~ Hot Air Balloon ~ Thanks B.

October 2nd, 2017 18:12