Comments received on poems by Marillene



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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME MARILLENE (nice mane !) Thanks for posting your first Story in poetic style ! So cool ~ so spaced out ~ drip drip drip ! Rejection& dejection does lead to self harm ~ especially for Ladies ~ it is harmful and not really the answer. I know it is much easier for Men to say \"Better to have Loved & Lost than never to have Loved at all\" but personally I have learned something from each of my \"Love Encounters\". Ladies are strong ~ Ladies are beautiful ~ Ladies do bounce back ! Your poem describes what so many MPS Members have gone through or are going through ! Every blessing ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

October 3rd, 2017 04:04

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FredPeyer said:

Marillene, welcome to MPS!
This is your first posting, and what a beauty it is! It draws the reader in, keeps him mesmerized until the so unfortunate end. Want to read more from you!

October 3rd, 2017 00:38

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Karsten Turrey said:

This is some of the best writing I have ever heard. It is truly captivating and incredibly hard to get enough of, I have read it several times already, I love it. Great job, I can\'t wait to read more of your writing

October 3rd, 2017 00:31