Comments received on poems by Swavey
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jarcher54 said:
I find great wit in your opening couplet:
People don\'t feel my pain
And sometimes neither do I
The first line is something we all say to ourselves... the second one, well, we don\'t express it quite so perfectly. We say we cover our pain up, put on a brave face, bite our lip... but ... what you said! Nice. We don\'t feel it but it\'s there.
April 21st, 2020 01:29
jarcher54 said:
I find great wit in your opening couplet:
People don\'t feel my pain
And sometimes neither do I
The first line is something we all say to ourselves... the second one, well, we don\'t express it quite so perfectly. We say we cover our pain up, put on a brave face, bite our lip... but ... what you said! Nice. We don\'t feel it but it\'s there.
April 21st, 2020 01:29
Hard Love
Anna Marg said:
It\'s her loss. One day you\'ll find someone who will appreciate, respect and love you for who you are!
October 31st, 2017 14:20
Anna Marg said:
It\'s her loss. One day you\'ll find someone who will appreciate, respect and love you for who you are!
October 31st, 2017 14:20
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Goldfinch60 said:
That one person can bring you out from the depths in which you find yourself. Keep reaching for them, that person will bring you into the light. Welcome to MPS.
October 11th, 2017 01:04
Goldfinch60 said:
That one person can bring you out from the depths in which you find yourself. Keep reaching for them, that person will bring you into the light. Welcome to MPS.
October 11th, 2017 01:04
