Comments received on poems by JADED
Father I’m here to Stay
Laura🌻 said:
Jaded, (an interesting name)...
An excellent write! I enjoyed reading it!
I especially liked the lines...
“He was the light that was over my shadow. You kept me from giving up when I thought there was no other way,
So now nothing else can cloud my vision...
...but my faith will only grow stronger
and Father I’m here to stay!”
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 16:23
Laura🌻 said:
Jaded, (an interesting name)...
An excellent write! I enjoyed reading it!
I especially liked the lines...
“He was the light that was over my shadow. You kept me from giving up when I thought there was no other way,
So now nothing else can cloud my vision...
...but my faith will only grow stronger
and Father I’m here to stay!”
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 16:23
Father
SLR said:
If the prayers the preachers taught were more like this I think more people would go to church. Very touching and heartfelt. Great job
May 16th, 2018 22:50
SLR said:
If the prayers the preachers taught were more like this I think more people would go to church. Very touching and heartfelt. Great job
May 16th, 2018 22:50
What is Left?
ron parrish aka wordman said:
profound thoughts,i guess we all ask that question
October 16th, 2017 01:12
ron parrish aka wordman said:
profound thoughts,i guess we all ask that question
October 16th, 2017 01:12
